"So, let’s start this at the beginning one more time,
My name is Sunset Shimmer. I was bitten by a radioactive spider... And for the past few months, I've been the one and only: Spider-Girl!
You probably know the rest... That i saved the city, helped lots of innocent people, made a very close heroic acquaintance, got a sweet new look from one of my many new close friends, told a "certain someone" about my little part time job, and now, I have finally found a way to share my new gifts with this world. As someone i may have lost but still lives on in my mind and heart once said, that "With great power, there always comes great responsibility."
Description by Hungry Hero
This story takes place in the EGFU: Equestria Girls Fiction Universe
Volume I - With great power comes great responsability :
Saga Vulture:
Arc Spider-girl : Chapters 1 to 4
Arc Electro : Chapters 5 to 6
Arc Vulture : Chapters 7 to 10
Volume II - Web of Shadows :
Saga The Fiend:
Arc Lizard : Chapters 1 to 4
Arc Rhino : Chapters 5 to 6
Arc The Fiend & Starlight Glimmer : Chapters 7 to 9
Saga Symbiote:
Arc Taskmaster : Chapters 10 to 15
Arc Fisk & Black Cat : Chapters 16 to (Ongoing)
In this group there is a formatting error so a few sentences look like they are new paragraphs but do not have the spacing for it to be correct. Also in the underlined part you may want to expand on it has having that grade means she is going very well and is not in danger of her grade dropping due to one bad paper, if the paper isn’t a large portion of the grade. Secondly a few time in the story you used an unusual mark for the quotes. The proper one is this one “ mark.
Overall this is a good introduction and I would like to see where you plan on taking this story.
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Yeah, I'd have to agree. That is one huge wall of text.
Some grammar errors but they don't make the story unreadable. I enjoyed it and look forward to the next chapter.
Venom in the future? If so please let Venom live by the end and be somewhat of a good guy by the end as well.
ow please continue this cause sunny having to deal with all the crazy spider usually has to go though would be awesome especially with how snarky she can get.
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Don't worry about Venom.
I've got some plans for him.
I'm suddenly very afraid of Sunset having her Uncle Ben moment.
And so it begins
Well if she gets her inspiration from that Flash, or any of them, she should be good.
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Barry Allen is my favourite DC super hero, so i thought it would be a great idea she gets inspiration from him
You definitely need a dope suit.
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hu hu hu...So do I....
Well thats one way to put it.
Why no pun here? This was a perfect place to use the phrase 'flew the coup."
Somewhere across town, Rarity shivers and doesn't know why...
i hope this turns out better than the amazing spiderman 2
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I hope too
I vote for 'Spider-corn'. Or is that too corny?
Not to say that I distrust Red Light or anything, but I do. You don't set off the spider-sense without reason.
And I'm going to hope against hope that the little rescue between Spider-girl and Twilight is a possible precursor to some SunLight in this story. Not fishing for spoilers, and if there isn't going to be, no worries. Just my SunLight inclinations manifesting.
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There will be no SunLight i'm afraid :(
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Eh, no worries. Like I said, not a deal breaker.
That hit me right in the heart.
I wish I could see what Sunset’s Homemade Spider suit looks like. And then I can’t wait to see and or imagine what her official Spider-Suit looks like!
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I asked someone to do it
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Here it is ;)
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Kick-A!
the cover art is the official spider suit right?
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It's her homemade suit.
She's going to keep it for a little while.
Here's another Spider-Verse story that might interest you and give you some ideas.:
- Equestria Girls
- Romance
- Adventure
- Drama
Rainbow Dash was once just an ordinary teenage girl going to Canterlot High, but then, one day, she got bitten by a mutated spider and woke up with superpowers beyond her wildest dreams. But what will she do with them? (Flutterdash pairing)10288995
Oh, i'll take a look at it
I see Sunset hasn’t quite got the hang of her Spider Sense. I hope she can find out why she keeps seeing that red aura and can deal with it.
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She's still trying to figure out how it works
{police cars} You need to move that {s}
{police officers} You need to get rid of an {s}
Also, when Sunset bumps into Twilight, shouldn't it be Twilight falling down? Sunset is superhuman now. If nothing else, landing on her backside shouldn't hurt at all. If anything she should show surprise that it doesn't hurt like it would have in the past.
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You're absolutely right about Sunset
And I'll correct that
Huh, so Sunny didn't think to make herself a proper mask? Tisk tisk Sunset.
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you should also had hero or spider to Friendly neighborhood.
I couldn't help but notice two things.
One of them being that Dash was oblivious to her friendship magic making her a magical superhero (although I know this is your book and i don't care if this is way off, lol).
The second thing, is that i don't know which version of Flash Sentry you're writing about, haha 😂
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What do you mean "Which version of Flash Sentry"?
Hope to see more fo our favorite web slinging magic horse girl
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Soon
I've found a couple of spelling errors but overall not bad
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Thanks
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Chapter 5 is coming
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When?
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Soon
And we get our first meta-throwdown. Good luck Sunny.
Better name then Electro.
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Agreed.
And thus Sunset/ Spider-Girl gets her web shooters and is hopefully ready for the world as a webslinger.
Now, if we could just do something about the outfit.....
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I can't imagine anyone other then Rarity where Sunset tells her hero life first. Well.. maybe Rainbow.
I have an idea for a new name. The Sunset-Spider
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Maybe too on the nose.
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So is Spider-Noir, or Psider-Pig, or....well I can go on. But you do get the point?