The Triwizard Tournament(or not)

by GRYFFINDOR123456

epilogue(we shine like rainbows)

Epilogue

Applejack grasped Sunset's hand. Sunset slung her guitar over her.

"1... 2... 1! 2! 3! 4!" cried Pinkie Pie.

"Once upon a time

You came into my world and made the stars align," sang Applejack

"Now I can see the signs

You pick me up when I get down so I can shine," replied Rarity.

"Shine like rainbows," sang the girls "Shine like rainbows
Shine like rainbows
Shine like rainbows,"

"Friends, you are in my life," sang Rainbow Dash. "And you can count on me to be there by your side,"

"And when the music comes alive," replied Sunset. "We sing our songs to lift us up so we can shine"

"And the sound that we hear in our hearts makes a crescendo

And the light that ignites in the dark, it makes us all glow." sang the girls

"And shine like rainbows," they sang "We shine like rainbows
Shine like rainbows
We shine like rainbows."

Comments

[Silent Wing]

While the concept behind this sounds intresting, I am unsure if I would count it as a story at all, with an average wordcount of only 350 words per chapter. It sounds extremly rushed and I think you could have made much more out of it. So sorry for it, but I have to downvote this.

[GRYFFINDOR123456]

I was actually planning on writing a better version of this on Fanfiction.net.
I normally would copy and paste the story onto here(kind of) and add a couple more stuff in.
I might add the Quidditch world cup, but that’s down to the readers.
I just wanted to put in a question of what ifs?
And answers.

[proudtobeabrony667]

I appreciate the setup ti this story, however if I am to add any constructive criticisms it seemed too fast paced for me, I still like the story itself but my only wish is that it was more filled out in some areas

[GRYFFINDOR123456]

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as i said, when i get the time(and finish my Greatest showman fanfic and all my school work), i will rewrite it and repost

[Clopian26]

Well that was a really weird really quick story

[GRYFFINDOR123456]

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yeah. Quirky, isn’t it.