Greetings from Venezuela, I don't expect to do much here, I just got a few stories in my head and wanted write them here, I hope you like them. I take Commissions and can get Ko-Fi donations.
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This story is a sequel to The Legend of La Fiera
After receiving notifications from multiple ponies disappearing or getting murdered by alleged ghosts, the princesses decided to send a group of guards to the western coast of Equestria to investigate this cases and report back.
Little did they know they would meet one of this ghost sooner than expected.
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It started out good but the pacing kind of drags a bit as for the ending I do want to see what the guards are going to do.
Is this getting a sequel?
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Despite all the stories being anthological, the "Legend" stories are all continuations so you'll see either what happened to the guards or what their report was.
Just curious, in what point do you feel the pacing started to drag out?
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It was around the time the guards were camping out maybe instead you could have had the guards talk more to help flesh out their personalities.
Finally made it back to Fimfiction.
Yes, the Princesses sending a team to investigate would be the next step. This story feels more like it is a chapter in a bigger story rather than a story in it's own right, so I am taking it that there will be more posted when you have them ready and time allows. I can't see the Princesses staying out of it for much longer, but the question is if they will show up in person, er, pony, or send guards and investigators with new spells and magic to do the actual monster fighting. It should be good, which ever way the story goes.
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Hey, nice to see you back!!
Yes, the chapters are, technically, anthological, but they all tell an overarching story and it's kinda scary because this is the first where I really don't know where to head but I still have some problems deciding which story should go next but, for now, I still have some stories to tell using ghost from my country, and I hope you enjoy them.