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Nanrite


Horror and adventure are what I mostly write, hope you like them!~

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Golden Remedy, a young field medic with Canterlot's Rescue Division, is sent on her first assignment to the small town of Sunny Springs. Remy's first mission goes horribly wrong upon entering an abandoned plantation deep within the Sunny Springs Forest. Within she finds things that were never meant to be. She heard stories of monsters as a filly, but never thought they were real.


Thanks TotallyNotCelly for proof reading all my works! You the best!

Chapters (10)
Comments ( 27 )

Ho ho ho-lee shit, I am getting some SERIOUS Resident Evil vibes from this. Also, not gonna lie, the part about the bear-like creature in the woods made me shudder a little. Lol this story is great, definitely finish it

I will give it a whirl and add it to my reading list. I should get to it in the next day or three. I always thought we needed more Sci Fi snd horror on this site.

The Monk
Her hands were still bound with rope, she debated an escape before all the stupidity gave her an aneurysm. -Scarheart

Its a good start,

Im looking forward to more.

The Monk
“Puberty was a curse for those inflicted with it, and boundless amusement for others who survived the process.” -Scarheart

According to the map, there is a small one-room cabin here that the Colt Scouts used to use.” — “It’ll be our base of operations,” Swift said.

Camp Crystal Lake, anypony? :pinkiecrazy:

“Oh yeah!” Bow said. “Puh-Place should do fine fuh-for a cuh-cuh-communications center!”

Placing the guy with a stutter as the radio operator seems like planning for failure.

I want one herb patch for all five of us.

There’s a marijuana joke to be made here, e’rey day.

Sheriff Quick Draw is a ham-hoofed name, but so are all pony names, really.

This story is fun and well written so far.

9734878
I'm glad someone noticed that the guy in charge of communication has a stutter, it was a fun little joke~

Thanks for the compliments too! I'm really enjoying writing this and I hope you continue to enjoy reading!

:twilightsmile:

9711710
I'm a big RE fan! Had to do a story kinda geared towards Resident Evil at some point! Going to try and keep this updated somewhat regularly so I hope you continue to enjoy it ^^

9712425
Thank you, I hope you continue to enjoy it!

Chapter three here is very much like the intro to the original resident evil.
Only the voice acting is better. :trollestia:

“Thanks Remy,” Lance replied before adding “It’s just, if we die here I want to be on good terms.”

Way to be fatalistic, they haven’t even seen anypony die yet. Lance needs a lorazepam.

“Clear…” Lance said, calling back to her. “Thank Celestia’s sweet ass, it’s just a library.”

Celestia’s sweet ass, as opposed to Celestia’s sour or salty ass.

“Captain?” Remy called out.

“WESKER!”

Still fun.

Equivalent exchange anyone?

“They would have radioed us if that were the case!” Lance cursed. “This… damn it, it makes no sense!”

They forgot about the radio that dropped from the sky pretty quickly.

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Captain Swift Hoof has his radio still.

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Yeah but the preceding sentence is:

“Maybe Sky finally made it back?” Remy asked, turning to her squadmate and looking at him hopefully.

I get what you mean though. :raritywink:

9815489
That's a lot of pressure! I hope you and your viewers enjoy it! :twilightsheepish:

Hrmm. You might want to put hr in some brackets between perspectives. it makes a nice


to separate them. Just so it doesn't all run together.

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I typed it all up in Gdocs before copying it here. I had multiple spaces between them but I guess the copying process messed with that. I will try and fix it though! Thank you for letting me know! :twilightsmile:

9959181
Yeah, copying from gdocs doesn’t always copy everything. Some formats remove extra blank lines automatically too.

Story is still good though. :twilightsmile:

9959508
Thanks! Glad you're enjoying it! Next chapter is done and just needs to be corrected, you can expect that real soon!

Comment posted by R E deleted Dec 21st, 2021

I just want to update everyone on the status of this fic. It's coming back very very soon, like new chapter in a day or two soon! I also want to say sorry for the wait, my life has been really hectic. I'm working a new job that's full time, I am trying to go to the gym more, etc. I don't have a lot of free time but I am gonna try and get more chapters out because I enjoy it, you all seem to enjoy it, and it's just a lot of fun to write scary stories about missing ponies, monsters, and the mayhem than ensues! So have a great day everyone, new chapter on the way!~

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