Citizens of Cascade Falls, the enemy is dangerously close to your homes, and you must evacuate. Feel no fear, for their attempts to take your town will be futile. A battalion of America's finest vigilantly stand on guard to ensure your homes are protected from the communist pigs. Vacate the area immediately after hearing this message. A refugee camp is prepared fifteen miles from here for any and all American citizens.
Please have your forms of identification ready upon arrival. Failure to comply with this rule will immediately result in execution. Please follow these steps, for they are your best hope of survival.
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This is a WIC crossover, following the plot and storyline of the game, with a few improvisements to where the details were too vague.
Cover picture made by Wubsy.
The Capitalists will fall by our Soviet might.
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Oh Celestia, A WiC crossover?
Oooh, promising.
Just remember to fix a few errors; I notices you forgot to capitalize "I" several times.
Try to capitalize some of your letter's as well as improving some grammar. Some parts of the story had me slightly confused, like was the small town they were fighting in near Seattle or New York. Other than that, I enjoyed it. Good start for a person's first story.
Also, try not to write the whole story in italics. It doesn't look right. Unless it was just for this chapter, than it's not as bad.
Cascade Falls? Where's Bannon?
interesing story i cant wait for the next chapter
A world in conflict fic?! I've been waiting eons for such a thing!
P.S It was Russia that invaded Seattle not the Chinese they didn't join the war with the soviets until after Cascade falls.
Awesome, why is vinyl scratch a main character?
1187944 Anyone that has played WiC long enough should never forget this Iconic scene at Cascade falls.
That video waz awersome
1187957 Best. Dishonourable Discharge. Ever.
Sad/Comedy/Human? I suppose stranger things have happened...
1187953 later on mate. I'm not introducing all the characters and their conflicts at once because it would be a clusterfuck, heheh
1187953 later on mate. I'm not introducing all the characters and their conflicts at once because it would be a clusterfuck, heheh>>1187957 bannon redeemed himself in 10 seconds flat. Hope they make another WIC ;(
1187300 [Spoiler alert] Cascade falls afaik is fictional but from what in-game has told us it is somewhere east of Seattle up in the mountains.
What is so interesting about the town to warrant a nuclear strike though is that there is a fort not to far from the town which contains the plans for SDI (Strategic Defense Initiative, which the soviets don't know doesn't work) your tasked to defend the fort from the ensuing soviet invasion, but near the end the defense force get over whelmed by Soviet Armored Battalions.
The beginning of this video after the funny cutscene explains it best.
Here's to your story going well. This actually reminded me a bit of fallout 3 to be honest. Maybe you could give my story a lookif you want? Cheers!
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I'll read it later, and post a new comment.
Enough has been said from me.
Alrighty everyone, due to the immense amount of positive feedback ill probably get a chapter up in 1-2 days. I've also recently found myself an editor, so you can expect less of that grammar problems.
1188100 Not gonna happen mate. From what I have heard, the company that made the game tanked after they made the sequel.
Personally, I don't know all the details, but I suggest you go to TVtropes for more information.
1188529 It takes place during the cascade fall defense since it is mentioned that they were the bait for the soviets. What rubs me odd is that our guy didn't get mention of it since Bannon said he talked to the men about it. But I guess he was just out of the way away from a radio at the time.
I'm not sure why the Chinese are mixed up with the soviets.
Also Seattle was gonna get nuked by a B83 gravity bomb. Cascade falls got hit by a cruise missile of sorts.
Wut, scoots is a girl....
You, author, friend me on WiC now.
1188529 Ermm, you kinda screwed up thar. I changed Chinese to Russians, and parker and sawyer DID succeed in taking back Seattle at the end... just saying. This takes place at Cascade Falls
1188762 I think it was something along the lines of
Bannon: "Oh, hey guys we're gonna sit over here and lure the soviets into the center of town while a nuke flies in and blows the crap out of us and Ivan."
Everyone else: "What?"
Bannon: "Glad you all understand."
1188819 That would work too.... >:)
1188822 yeah, i made mistake.
I am interested. Welcome to my favs list. Have a thumbs up as well.
YES! FINALLY!
1188733 what would make you think otherwise? -_-
The first dislikers....
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I always thought he just needed a hug.
Also, the chinesse? I thought they came in as the Soviet's allies and never were actually seen.
1189354 fixed that, so um... yeah
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It still says the Chinese.
1189391 Really? URRGGH, must'a forgot to save... stupid
1189602 i phaild
It wasn't until I realized this was a World in Conflict crossover did I realize, "Wow, we really will cross-over everything, won't we?" But I love WiC, so I approve.
The story still says the Soviets are Chinese in some places, though.
The introductory scene and briefing was well done, and your writing style is solid. I- along with others, I'm sure- heard everything in Alec Baldwin's voice.
However, your punctuation and grammar needs minor adjustment. More than once, I spotted "than"s that should be "then"s, stray capital letters, and errant punctuation. They were minor errors that didn't take away from the story, but became distracting after repetition.
Still, I'm curious to see where this goes.
So here I am, just barely a week since finishing my fourth? replay of Wic and thinking "I need moar and I just did the same with the C&Cs". Then I come to the main page, and instead of looking the new articles box, for the first time I look into the new stories, and find this.
This must be a signal, so I'll put this on "read later", and I'll decide later if I send you to the german front or pull you back home, lieutenant.
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Em, I mean, if I like it or not. I was joking with the "german front as a meat grinder" phrase from World in conflict.
1190386 now i get it. now its funny. so
*feels like dumbass*
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Heh, don't worry, I feel like a dumbass for making jokes that needs to be explained. :P No, wait, that reads like another of those jokes... Oh well. *throw himself to the nearest bed and sleeps until next century*
I honestly don't have much to say that hasn't been already said. I've posted 1 fan-fic on here, and let me tell you, that was a terrible story. I had some good ideas and clever jokes, but it was mary-sue with bland writing. The first story anypony writes probably won't be their greatest creation, but I have high hopes for this. I look at the plot before the grammar. Pun intended. I will admit you need some practice with your writing, but the storyline is very well done. I can't wait to see more!
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You have my attention sir.
Kudos on a well written chapter.
Hope to see more in future!
1191349 Is cool man. Is cool. Just find a new editor, or if you like the one you have then ask him to be more careful next time.
1191359 nah, he's good and all, just made a mistake... i admit, a very horrible and stupid one, but meh
1191380 What's going on? Where am I? Where's your ID?
1191421 *flash*
*forgets how to breathe and falls over dead*