Trixie Lulamoon is a struggling student who has always dreamed of becoming a great and powerful magician. Unfortunately, she is now in her final year at Celestia and Luna's Academy for Young Sorcerers and still further from her dream as she has ever been.
However, Trixie's fate takes a change for the better when she is given a chance to become everything she has ever wanted to be. They say power corrupts, but Trixie doesn't care. She will become the top student and the best magician in the academy, even if it means borrowing a power she doesn't fully understand from someone she doesn't fully know.
And in the wings, something far more sinister stirs...
This is the first story I have written for this site that isn't connected to the Bloodlines Continuity. Tell me what you think, and if you want more!
So far I'm interested in where this is going. The world and setup is nothing I haven't seen before, but I'm not too picky about that as long as the plot is engaging. So far, it is, mainly because Trixie is my main mare.
I don't see any issues with the writing itself, so keep it up!
That one line made this whole story for me. I'm so in.
Really looking forward to where this is going. Given the tags, I can imagine things are only just starting.
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Lot of Harry Potter references in here, some more blatant that others. I don't mind just so long as it doesn't become so common that it detracts from the story. You don't want readers thinking of stories other than your own to read.
I like how Trixie's new magic isn't working right away. She's going to have to experiment and learn as she goes.
Curious to know what the new Kirin will be up to. We only got one side of the story so far, so who knows which side of the conflict Trixie will want to be on.
Keep at it!
Interesting start. Always happy to see a Trixie story.
Good job helping a dude in need Trixie.