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Twilight Star


Twilight and Luna: two mares made for each other

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Many of the ponies think that Nightmare Moon has ceased to exist, but what nopony knows, is that actually, she is living in the old castle of Everfree Forest, thinking of a way to get revenge on Celestia.

After she finds a pool that is capable of making clones, she sees the perfect opportunity to get revenge at Celestia. The only problem it's that her clone is very cheerful and only speaks "eternal night."

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An entertaining read. I give this 3 Eternal Night points.

Very fun:derpyderp1: altho I do find it sad that Nightmare Moon's clone dies:raritydespair:

She might be able to go to the castle to look for the Elements to destroy them, but she had a problem: the castle where Celestia lived, must be full of royal guards and they would probably warn that damn sun-loving princess that she has returned! As much as she liked to get the attention of the ponies, she didn’t want to get the attention of Celestia’s guards, she wanted to be discreet.

Don't worry about those; they are entirely harmless.
I mean, remember how you had beaten them earlier with barely trying?
And they aren't that observant either:
One time Cadance/Chrysalis sung an entire song anout her evil plan and none of them noticed anything, despite her being so loug it must be heard in the entire castle wing...

and after she won, she would destroy her copy, since it couldn’t have two of her ruling Equestria, could?

Unless her copy would have the same idea at the same time.
Then she would have to literally fight against herself...

Nightmare Moon did not imagine that she could be so cheerful, even if this is just a clone of her, and it started to make her angry inside, as it started to remind her of Celestia’s cheerful and outgoing way.

Deny it all you want, but in the end she might make for an good distraction.


Good story!
I enjoyed reading it.


Hopefully Celestia knows how to repair an damaged mirror pool clone.

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We don't know for sure the clone died.
When the Pinkie Pie clones got destroyed their bodies disappeared, but the Nightmare Moon body is still there.
Maybe she is just knocked out
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when another clone is killed:
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Midnight: She will answer!
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Midnight: how are you looking to join me on my FAIR revenge trek !?
Midnight: together we can destroy our offenders!
Midnight: those who brought us into this world only to throw us away as trash when we were no longer needed.

The Nightmare Moon clone was pretty cute.
Aside from the side-effect of the Lake Mirror's clones being simple-minded or something, I bet how the clone acted reflects a adorable side Nightmare Moon has if she wasn't busy being bitter and wanting eternal night. Like her kinder side if she got the love/attention she wanted :0

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