Nice story, keep up the good work

Huh, a story after Art de Triomphe's own heart. I like it, especially that Colgate's the one leading the fray.

This isn't a second person fic. Can you please remove the tag? The story was good, though there's a good amount of grammatical errors and could deal with some cleaning up. When you write, try reading what you wrote aloud to see if it makes sense. Also, you wouldn't pluralize Berry's name. None of this is meant to be mean, I'm just trying to help.