How Easy is Redemption?

Spoilers for Season 5 of She-Ra: Princesses of Power.

After the defeat of Horde Prime, the Best Friend Squad goes to exploring a universe now out of Horde control. They come across a world full of magic that the Horde did not touch and discover a land where Redemption might be easier than it is on Etheria.

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Captain Rackham

Captain Rackham #1 · May 20th, 2020 · 3 · ·

So many references...
XL5, Adam and Adora's mother.. (yes i know that classic twist)
Well done

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cornholio4 #2 · May 20th, 2020 · 1 · ·

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Just fixed it thanks
What do you think

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cornholio4 #3 · May 20th, 2020 · · ·

10243243
I am pretty sure that you are only supposed to do that if it’s not the second to last item in a list, pretty sure an apostrophe doesn’t go before an and

What do you think fo the story

Sorry if I am be IOU’s by and thanks for helping with the errors as I am not very good at grammar

cornholio4

cornholio4 #4 · May 20th, 2020 · · ·

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Sorry to say that I never saw that rule before

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cornholio4 #5 · May 20th, 2020 · · ·

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Sorry again today any that I am not really good at grammar and so there maybe little errors like that as is usually only have to rely on my own spellcheck and grammar check on my laptop

And sorry if I am pushy but what do you think of the story? Thanks again for the help though I don’t think I feel comfortable putting in that extra apostrophe

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cornholio4 #6 · May 20th, 2020 · · ·

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Thanks very much and I disagree about bow

This would be the sort of thing I could see him doing, remember this is the dude who made his own battle figures for planning strategies and acted melodramatic when he died in the planning session

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