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Darkness and Evil are what I love. A story with a twist for good or worse. A realist of sorts. Not everyone can live in a happy world. Someone has to suffer for everyone elses happy lives.

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"I'm not an idiot! And I know what I'm doing! That's why they sent me[i/] here. I could've brought him back faster if I didn't have to wait for your bones to warm up to fly."

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ooooooh I didn't see that one at all no matter how much I read through it.

Comment posted by brony_789 deleted Jul 4th, 2020

so celestia stole control while the original owner of the body is drowning in her memorys

Sergeant is misspelled several times at the end of the chapter.

A nod and a chuckle, "It's strange to be the one taking orders." She stands and gives a mock salute, "At your word, Sergent."

"Not Sergent. Commander perhaps, but no longer Sergent. For now, just call me Leader Gem."

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That is so Frickin unfair and cruel for Celestia to do! This girl needs to STOP daydreaming, STOP being a Doormat P****! And be a badass Woman for Humanity for once!!!!! I may be a Guy/Dude. And love to see Human Male Protagonist be Dominant and beat up and kill Sexist/Xenophobic Assholes of OOC Ponies, and other MLP Creatures acting like the "Bad Guys" in many stories. But, I HATE seeing a Human Woman getting the short end of the stick every time. 😡

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Thank ya it didn't even come up as misspelled when I reread it.

so wait the girl they have taken over is "drowning" in celestia and twilights memorys while twilight is controling her body now along woth celestia who did untill twilight kicked her out of the control seat? i hope leater we see the human who has been drowning all this time come back but after fully adsorbing the memorys and kick the bodyjackers out ouf the driving seat. after all she has acess to both celestia and twilights memorys and when she has taken them all in she will be a force to be reconed with.

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also celestia seemed to mock her so doing that to someone who will eventualy have all your memorys is a bad idea (+twilights)
Edit: im hoping the girl has priority in her own body and the only reason she isnt in control is she is currently overwelmed and will come back and kick twilight and celestia out.

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What the F*** is Celestia's problem to be a Bitch to our poor Human Woman here?? If she try something to me. I make her wish she's NOT on the same planet with me!!!! :pinkiecrazy:

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with what she has said and her actions i can only guess that she views the lady as only a vessle for her freedome and allows her to help her ponys again. a side thing i suspect is that she might view the human as the cause of her pain because she was late and either is doing this because of that in a angry retaliation way or maby summons (like the human woman is) might not have rights so she could mearly view her possesion as justified as she summond her? dont have much info so this could be wrong

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Even though it's a Theory. But, it's NOT her damn fault she is late! It's probably Celestia's FAULT for making a imperfect "summoning" spell to make it late!


Our Human Woman needs to grow a Backbone, and make Celestia REGRET for treating her like trash!!!! 😡

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Not trash. A tool. A vessel. Hope she pulls a fast one and traps the ponys in her with no hope of them escapeing

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Sorry if I over exaggerated a bit. I just don't like what's happening here. IF this is a Fusion like DBZ. Then, Celestia is definitely doing it wrong! And is just possession the poor girl's body.


Also, WHY did it even happened? How can Celestia ( Including Twilight) save Equestria in a Human Woman's Body with some Magic Powers?

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ok so if we assume a bit we can guess some things. if the reason the alicorns canot move on is that they are teverd forever to their connectid force or celestial object (celestia will live till the sun dies and twilight till freidship dies eg both when the universe ends and sentient life dies out respectivly) then it is safe to say that the sorce of the magic is from the force or objects link to the alicorns sending it into the womans body as she is now their vessle. now celestia and the other alicorns have been dead a while so far and its not out of the question they might not be nice or reasonable anymore as for however long they have been dead they havent had any contact with others and taking the womans body is a logical option for them in their eyes as they see themselfs as more important and more deserving (and they have a broken contry to look at for self assurence if they feel guilty) this is BS but they think they know best and are unlikely to listen to reason.
Now what i think is happening in the woman in question is that the fusing of not only with one but 2 alicorns would have overwelmed her and her mind is trying to catch up but is struggling to deal with thousends of years of memorys and information from multiple individuals so while her mind is ocupied celestia and twilight take the oppertunity to take control (and possibly impeed the womans mind keeping up).
im hopeing luna alive or dead calls them on their what can only be called violation of an innocent woman's mind, body and soul as after suffering similer herself im hoping luna and maby cadence will help this woman gain control again then she could possibly be their ally insted of puppet

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Agreed. I know they died. But, it doesn't F***** excuse them for losing themselves, and OOC Bitches to the poor girl, and her body! So, Luna and/or Cadence should help. And maybe give Both Celestia/Twilight a GOOD KICK IN THE ASS!!!!!! 😈

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agreed the way i see it another factor could be that since celestia and twilight dont know the pain of possesion and imposters (the thing with the changlings where starlight solved it was over quickly) they view it as fine and cadence and luna are likely to help the woman due to luna knowing how bad being possessed is and cadence knowing how it can be to have someone ruin your image and pretend to be you (we dont know how long cadence was taken in the wedding but it wasent a rush job so she likely had to think and get mocked for a while before twilight came for her). over all i think a human with the alicorn powers and advice from all of them seems like a good hero for that world wouldent you agree (i know giving advice isnt much of a punishment but if they canot leave and she traps them in her it could be)

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Good Points! As for the punishment? Maybe the Girl has had enough, then starts to take back her body. Then, once she is done. She can use her imagination to physically/mentally/emotionally Torture Both Celestia and Twilight for ever screwing her. And their Punishment is to be TRAPPED in her deepest conscious as a prison. Kinda like Naruto did to Kurama: the Nine Tailed Fox.


Then, have Luna and Cadence act as Guards/Wardens. And they might change Celestia and Twilight to their "Normal" selves. While, the Girl would at least use her Alicorn/Human Hybrid Body to at least Save their World. But, she will STEAL the glory out of Celestia/Twilight. And she will rule the reformed Equestria in their places. As Punishment to see her save, and rule their Kingdom. And NEVER give them their New Bodies with her New Magic Powers. 😈 😈 😈

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i agree with the hero part but flat out tortue might make celestia and twilight feel right in theri assessment that they were better so insted an idea would be for cadence and luna to imprison them both in the womans mind where they are kept and unable to do anything like the woman was as she was stll likely getting new memorys but couldnt do anything as she was overwelmed. but yea cadence and luna imprison the others and act as the womans mentors/freinds/companions while she saves the world.
while torturing them might seem the way to go it would be better to ruin their image with the truth which is they possessed and violated her and that (if it happens) she has the backing of luna and cadence.

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So No Torture? Oh COME ON! Celestia/Twilight deserve it for screwing with her!!!! Maybe have Luna or Cadence beat them up once?

But, your idea to exposing the truth for everypony in the real world that Celestia/Twilight got Corrupted and screw with a Innocent Person's body and mind sounds like a Great Idea. 😈

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while torturing them might seem like justice the way it is most mentaly hurtfull to them would be to put them right back in the place they were. aka unable to talk or interact with anyone extpt when the others want to. in other words its a kind of torture for them to be unable to effect anything anymore and now insted of being free a bit they are conpletly trapped and forced to watch someone else save their ponys while they can do nothing but watch andeven if they want to help their own actions have made them ignored and left in peace.
do you understand how this is worse for them now?

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This is better. Plus, it's their OWN Fault in the first place to steal a innocent person's body!

You know something? When I first see this. I thought this story was to have a Hero be late for some reason. And she will have to go and protect/fight, with a ghost Celestia and Twilight to aid her. But, NO!!!!!! Celestia and even Twilight turn into Jerks, and just stole/possessed the poor girl's body.

I hope that when this is over.

That the Girl is the New Ruler, with having Luna and Cadence supporting her. While Celestia and Twilight be in a Mental Prison inside the girls mind. And they should be ashamed of themselves.

so twilight might actualy be conserned for the human whos body she snatched?

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better than celestias seeming want for their host to be drowning in memorys for as long as she wants

"Shhh... I'm sorry I ah! Ah!!"

As Celestia's wings press themselves against the woman's body, a brilliant light shines from both of them. Celestia feels everything the woman does. She can smell what she smells. For the first time in forever, she felt.

Alive.

"Ahh!!"

Your dragon soulbonded with my grandpa!!

oh i am so sorry that is a complete violation of the law. slut dragon!! slut!! slut!!

hope this ends with twilight taking out celestia and leaving the human with their magic and memorys to do with what she sees fit

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I have an ending in mind that I hope doesn't disappoint the readers

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uhhh ... if you are angry for not seeing the supposed protagonist, I would also be because I only entered because of the promise of a human Oc fic in post-equestria, no ... this ... about the yaoi ... I'd be lying to you if I said I hate him, I like some but not all, and I hate when it's M / M and they're both muscular ... it gives me the creeps ... about Celestio and what he did to the Oc ... no I can say that it is cruel because I know of "other" heavenlies that have been equal or worse (much worse) than this heaven, so I will not say my opinion, about the human male protagonist being dominant and hitting Sexist Assholes, I agree, Xenophobes (it was when someone disowned a culture, right?) they are just as bad but usually not as visible as sexist assholes, about hitting other MLP creatures only when they are bad guys I don't agree so because unless less than you can't, you can use the old tactic of "Evangelizing" the bad boy (on girls I allow it only when hitting refers to a 12-24 session of Rough sex that would leave you blank for days) and about watching Human Women receive the shorter end of the stick ... not much can be done the truth is, they are usually used more for sex fics and stuff, I have not seen a single protagonist really, which is quite sad, women have usually been shown to be very wrong just by following their feelings, which is not bad, which It is not wrong to listen to your instinct and your rational side much more often, with that and your emotional side together, women would be stronger than men ... I guess, I am not a woman to be able to declare that as a fact

Thank you google translator for translating this message! if there is any mistake, blame the translator ;v

ponys have been kicked from the driver seat and now we get to see who our human has become

I'm on the 7th chapter and we have not talked about how Celestia this possess someone

"And that's just ignoring them! Damn that! You have power far beyond the average Unicorn! Even the unaverage unicorn! And you're not going to use it! Maybe death hasn't taught you shit!" Sturdy says snorting and stomping his hoof.

Celestia doesn't learn lessons. But this quote does make me curious on how were they able to kill two of the most powerful magical creatures in the world

Is this a crossover?

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It is not but I am curious on what you think it may be a crossover with

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