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Dr Sharaz Jek


Cynically Pretentious Hedonistic Nihilist...and those are my nicer qualities!

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Uhg...Damn, I kinda wanna read this cause I'm old enough to remember "bondage fairies". But on the other hand my read later list ain't gettin any smaller. Ah what the hell it ain't that long, who needs sleep anyway?

Meh i was never a fan of bondage faries. Even though this isnt my cup of tea it was well writen imma give you a thumbs up!

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Understand the endless To Read list, hope you enjoy! BF was my first hentai manga, good times!

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Thanks, must admit BF hits lots of my kinks!

It's got nothing to do with bondage, but it's still an excellent story!

I found that manga online, don’t remember where, right now, but I only read part of it. I’d like to read the rest at some point. Anyway, nice story, even though it doesn’t quite jive with the little I remember about Bondage Fairies.

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Thanks, lots of BF stories were like that really; just bondage style outfits and sex with woodland critters!
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Thank you, BF was all over the place, but I was going with the idea of Fluttershy kind of playing the Pfil role and Rainbow Dash of course Pamela!

I'm going to need a source for that image. 😛

How about Spike Isekai'd into a mystical dimension?

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Keeping Spike confined to The Depths of Oblivion and the sequel for Season of the Witch for now; writing him all the time will bore me, I'm afraid. At this point I've probably written him more than every other cast member combined!

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------ Review ------

Please keep in mind, I know I can be overly critical and negative at times. I can always find something to nitpick, even in the greatest works of literature ever written. Please don't take it personally!
-Fluttershy's first line does sound like a Breezie would say it.
-the area teamed with insects -- teemed.
-The 180 from fighting to fucking is neck-breakingly fast.
-Why are they dressed in leather?
-Gratuitous overkill, absolutely no subtlety.
-Like a lot of these, it seems rushed, not giving the subject matter the time it needs to develop.

------ Scores ------

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Cloppability: 70/100
Allure: 15/100
Enticement: 50/100
Immersion: 30/100
Prose Quality: 85/100
Total Score: 250/500
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-The 180 from fighting to fucking is neck-breakingly fast.
-Why are they dressed in leather?
-Gratuitous overkill, absolutely no subtlety.

To be fair, all these mean that this fic is remarkably faithful to what it's parodying.

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I think DLS and I have very different tastes in what's fappable, although granted Bondage Fairies is in a visual medium! Headless Rainbow was my main inspiration to start writing clop. I don't feel MLP is a remotely subtle show, nor do I like flowery fics, preferring past-paced, visceral stuff.

Still, it's another good reminder that pacing is probably the biggest issue I struggle with.:facehoof:

I imagine Angel's voice to be like Bugs Bunny's.

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