In the power invested by His Royal Highness Sombra, The Warlords were tasked in controlling crime in their various territories, recruiting former criminals and disgruntled upholders of the law. Serene Grace is the Crimson Warlord, and her gang The Flavor of the Week has watched over the city of Manehattan.
Serene Grace has always eliminated the Kingdom's problems with cold and brutal efficiency. Her cute and unassuming stature allowed her to pull the strings on many people. As memories of her past resurface and her heart given love, how will she handle it? Will she abandon her duty? Will she buckle under the weight of her newfound emotions? Well of course the fate Equestria hangs in the balance, but this time she wants to make different choices.
Not a bad story at all, love the unique alternate timeline. Characters are well thought out and their descriptions are very vivid. There is a spelling error in the long summary,
outside of that I like this story and look forward to seeing how it will do.
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Thanks for your feedback! I didn't notice the error... I usually write at night after work. I try to characterize the members and their skill by their specific days. With the boss being the most charismatic and dangerous and more of an unknown factor to most. With that in mind things flowed.
Not having read this story yet, I have to ask: Is this really a Pokémon crossover? The synopsis makes it sound more like a Warhammer fantasy crossover.
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Well few characters ARE pokemon... I just happened write this because I lost a bet, so I had to write a fanfic involving mlp and a Sylveon. Needless to say she was REALLY disappointed. Well everything seemed like a good idea at the time. I see now that the description doesn't really get across the kind of story this is. I'll be working on a more appropriate one. Thanks for the feedback.
Also Warhammer? All I can think of are Ultramarines riding ponies due to my unfamiliarity on the series. Sorry.