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I love Pinkie!
Also...first!
lovin' it so far fam, can't wait to see more
Comfy
That was fun to see BB have a role other than a one-dimensional beefcake in a fic. And once again, Anon is about to take on a fair bit of romance by making that next step.
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Yeah when I was drafting the story I was kind of sad to see BB not getting as much representation as a character, and I'm really liking how his character is turning out, and I definitely plan to dive more into his own little story as well down the line.
I'm really excited to write the next few chapters!
Yay, chapter!
Celestia enter the ring! oh interesting
The AnonxPinkie train is leaving the station. All aboard!
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Luna actually, and the shenanigans are going to be twice as fun with her!
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yeah! everyone loves a good old fashion love triangle!
Oooo, do I smell a future adventure in foalsitting?
Well that was a fun little adventure
Comfy
Ha, Full House reference!
Jeje, the mind of a human, I bet Discord could feel right at home in there, or perhaps it will be too chaotic even for him. She should consider herself lucky, she barely scratch the surface. Things in there can get real crazy, really fast.
Also, I sense two possible outcomes, either Luna decided to do some 'field investigation' and invent a reason to stay in Ponyville living with Anon to do some surveillance, (maybe pretending to wish to incorporate more on modern times, and like a fish out of water himself, Anon perhaps could help her fit in more easily)
Or the classic board, fill with red strings, a picture of Anon, connect with Pinkie, Rarity newspaper…you get the idea. Botton line I don't think we haven't see the last of Luna.
I like the idea that human minds are viewed differently compared to pony minds. The setup and general pattern of the human brain is vastly different to a horse/pony. It makes sense that it's a different beast entirely to luna. I also appreciate the notion that he must be some sort of monster or evil sleeper agent due to his mind being so vastly different, even though it can be explained away with a simple "humans and ponies are made differently". It will be interesting to see luna basically out herself as crazy to celestia because she convinces herself that the human is evil in some way, when even celestia could see he isnt.
The Full House dream segment gave me actual anxiety with how real it felt
Ha drunken hijinks
You would fuck with him though! The Shapifanny addendum proves it!
Huh, a new update less than a minute ago.
Edit: The only reason I know that is because I update a new chapter less than a minute ago and went to the front pages to see another story has updated right after mine
SNOWBALL KOMBAT!!!
The last thing I was expecting was a spirit bomb snow ball. I am extremely satisfied.
The complete lack of self awareness here by Luna that, maybe, just maybe, Anon doesn't like a nosey Princess poking around in his head without permission.
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The idea hit me out of nowhere while I was struggling to think of a good way to take the story, and after that, I just couldn't stop until the chapter was done lol
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Let's just say I'm excited to get to the thrilling climax of this particular arc!
Loving this! Its such a fun read.
Cute and comfy
I am confused at who's perspective is who's every time the POV switches.
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Ah, apologies for that. Upon rereading I can tell I could have used more descriptive language to more seamlessly shift between POVs.
Thanks for the feedback!
Her cover has been blown! I repeat Her cover has been blown!
Just echoing what was said in the land of greens. I like the characterizations and I've gotten plenty of laughs. Work a little more on showing the POV change to avoid confusing the reader. I've enjoyed the story so far and I look forward to reading more.
Wow, Luna was actually seeing someone DYING in front of her and she grin. She GRIN, I don't care how paranoid she was at the time, that is just sadist! NIGHTMARE MOON level of sadist. And to top it off, instead of I don't know show concern, and realized that a living been was in peril she EXTORT him for information basically making things a torture session. My god Luna what the hell is wrong with you! If Fluttershy finds out, you will receive more than an earful.
I really hope next chapter she gets her just desert because what she did was simple inhumane, no matter what your opinion of someone is, or if suspicions or not, you see them in agonizing pain you HELP them, that is just common sense. By god Anon didn't do anything to you, which makes things worse.
Really this chapter really left me with a really bad taste on my mouth, if that was exactly the intention well then bravo mission accomplish, but I really hope in the next chapter she realized how monstrous she just behaved or Anon gives her the 'The reason you suck!' speech because I'm sorry Luna you earn it at this point.
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Luna's old royal pride can't help but show itself as she revels in her victory, can it?
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Yeah I can see it now, je it really is gonna bite her in the ass at some point.
Grease was made in the 70's,but takes place in the 50's :b
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Darn! Thanks for pointing that out lol
Did this mf really instant transmission is ass away. Lmao.
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As soon as I read that line, I knew I was in for a good chapter. I was not ready for how stupidly fun it would be.
I say he give Luna exactly what she asked for, every horrible memory from every horror movie and creepy pasta imaginable, scenes from Saving Private Ryan or any gorefest movie, the memory of eating a raw steak, and any other less than "friendly" memories, stepping on a nail, catching one self in a zipper, etc... She wants hidden memories well by damn Anon can give them in spades, in full technicolor, with feelings, sound, taste and smell. Give Luna the real human experience and ever bit of Internet meme and ill conceivable. Because, I guarantee he has more of that locked in his head than she does likely.
Pinkie and anon being actually open about their love is actually refreshing lol
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No more beating around the bush!!
I see somebody watches OneyPlays.
I'm loving the romantic build up between Anon & Pinkie but Luna's "over the top" persecution of Anon is detracting from the overall narrative for me.
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That's a fair criticism, something I'm not going to leave unaddressed in the next chapter.
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I look forward to reading it.
I found this little gem and I could only think of this story.
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That's a cute song, it fits really well!
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Luna's not crazy, she's eccentric. But it's a shot hop to conspiracies and tinfoil hats when she starts putting up the strings to wall-mounted newspaper clippings and grainy photos like some demented spider web covering her room.
Oh man, it is AGONIZING to find this three whole years later, abandoned. This was an outstanding read, easily one of the best on the site. A shame that it's in the state it's in...