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Anonymous 1234321
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I'm unsure why the story is so trash, but sorry for the pain.
I don't blame you IF you went "Grogar 2.0" against everypony/everyone that either doesn't like you, or try to kill you for pathetic reasons.
It's an interesting premise and the pacing seems alright (to me at least, but I'm easy to please in that way).
You might want to get an editor to look over things though, some of the sentences show what you meant by "My English is trash be advised."
I'm looking forward to how this progresses, especially since I don't see any "dark" or "drama" tags along with the "comedy" one.
I like your story, pacing is fine. Can't wait to read more of story.
This feels like one of the reverse gender roles stories I do enjoy those quite a bit
I do enjoy your second option maybe you can also incorporate some of the story you mentioned earlier about him traveling and going to different countries maybe you can have some females come looking for him from his earlier exploits around the world I mean he does appear to be on Unkillable immortal There’s plenty of individuals who want that power for themselves.
Yay Gabby's here, she's a precious cinnamon bun that needs to be protected.
Interesting premise but I believe a portion of the long description would fit more in a prologue.
I will wait until there are more chapters because I do like the idea, but it needs more chapters in order to see it properly.
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Got it, I put the most of the description on it, since I'm writing a new chap I didn't write a actual prologue, but it is good enough.
I like the story but holy bucko roni you need a editer otherwise good story its funny aswell
I choose The Box.
I'd love to see both assassins join permanently.
Gods bless gabby, that adorable pile of fluff
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They will probably be, maybe gonna draw them because I don't know hot to describe the type of feathers that has in their head.
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Yeah... maybe I should buy grammarly premium since it show the weird parts.
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Grammarly is good, premium should help even more, but an actual editor is still best. I suggest going on the Fimfic discord and several groups made for the purpose to find an editor or two.
Me lo voy a guardar en el poto
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huy, que rico.
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Xdxdxd
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Estaría chido que hicieras una historia de romance de humano x celestia pero larga uwu, solo inténtalo, yo lo e echo en wattpad
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Or you could just use Word or Google Drive, they have auto-correct programs already installed. I use them whenever I pre-write before posting the whole chapter here.
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sadly my pc has this weird thing were I can't be a pirate, I tried installing it but it just brakes me knees every time, Except if word online works too, then I should probably use that.
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Nah, Celestia ya recibe suficiente amor, es verdad que en español hay apenas buenos fics de ella en general, pero la verdad cada vez que escribo algo en spañol me da cringe y pierdo las ganas de escribirlo a la larga.
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Uwu ok, bueno, si quieres ir a verme en wattpad mi cuenta dioskokun111
I wonder will there be more letters, or will the pony princesses take a hint on the first one?
Janefilly I'm going to assume means Tom boy clever
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https://www.fimfiction.net/blog/841406/rgre-primer
This explain a little how RGRE (Reversed gender roles equestrian) works in general, it may be different in some universe or authors, but they in general use the same vocabulary.
I've been reading these stories on my downtime at work, and this along with "Life finds a way" always bring a smile to my face when I read a new chapter.
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Thanks for the comment my guy, My brain usually scream unsure if I did a good job or not, and this help it make it shut up for a while.
(don't ask why my brain need constant reassurance, it just does.)
Good chapter. This story is a breath of fresh air for me, mostly with all the normal OCs having no backbone.
Decent art, decent story, will keep an eye on this.
If you need a good writing program for free, you could try LibreOffice.
Did you know that female peacocks are actually very plain looking it’s actually the male birds that are much more flamboyant in most species of bird But I guess in reverse general it be different would that mean that the males are plain looking
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I made it like that since I guessed it was fair since here the females are the one that have to call the attention of the males, and since the "girly" stuff are "cocky" stuff, it would made sense that a vibrant and adorned females would be more popular with males, making that subspecies evolve like this.
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I wonder if they can also carry over to the ponies I mean usually male Equines are more aggressive than females normallyBut since it’s the opposite that might explain why anonymous was having such a bad time especially if you ever seen how male horses act around females The same with male dears
Maybe he’s called a satyr because of the comics already have Sapient goats /Groger but they’re quadrupedal This way would explain his more mythological abilities since they’re known as spirits of the Woods they’re quite fertile if you’re wondering what to call anonymous’s new race
Second person stories are not really my thing, but this is actually pretty good. The characters seem interesting, a few grammar mistakes here and there sure, but overall a pretty good story. A shame that it doesn’t have more likes to it.
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Well, you are not that far off, probably gonna explain 60% of were Anonymous comes from in the next chapter, which I may write right away and let it cook in the oven for a while.
Right now I have the joke of the "next morning shock" living free rent and it is starting to annoy me.
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Thanks my guy, I try to do my best.
Is are boy going to get himself a harem
pissed
missing an S
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thanks, fixed
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Kinda? I mean In RGRE is kinda normal, since the males are in a ratio to females like 1/5 in most RGRE universes, I still don't say the official number in the story, but yea.
Also ponys harems are called "herd"
Griffins "flocks"
Dragons "Horde" (??)
And Idk what else to say about the others, since there are not any mino or deer waifu to make writers world build around them so they make a name for them.
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Maybe you can use the titles for the different groups depending on animalistic types so all bird creatures griffins Pegasus/vamp pony’s hippogriffs parrots can use flocks
Herbivores ponies zebras kirins minotaurs cows deer sheep use herds
Predator type species use packs
Nobility uses the title harems
Insect types can use swarms
In the comics are multiple different types of pony hybrids mentioned like half shark half spider the flutter ponies You can even take some fan made ones like the bee ponies or half wolfs and half dragons Hell there was even the one chimera girl that was in the Cartoon and comics That applejack fightsCanonically even a few races that one extinct in the world like elephants that used to be sapient
Bobs?
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Ok and love this story
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Nice Ideas, thanks for the brain storm.
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yea, it needed one O more, now is boobs.
Thanks for the save.
Hell yeah, anon being an absolutae beast in bed..
But what type of politic power he have?
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Gonna explain in the future, But you can guess by the things that he makes or the information that come to his brain by just thinking about something.
He is the equivalent of Wikipedia made... whatever Anon is now.
Also the fact that he can't be killed by conventional means is important too.
Didn’t have what? Parts missing here.
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Fixed, Thanks for the save.
HAH FUCK YOU GROGAR
Great chapter