This story is a sequel to How Sweet the Thought
You and Pinkie have been going out for a few years. It's... hectic, to say the least. But, you still love it. You love all of the wacky antics you get up to. You love the way that she lights up everypony's day, your own included. You love... her. And through it all, the two of you have never had a real fight. Is it because you do everything in your power to avoid upsetting her? Is it because she just doesn't get upset easily? Perhaps it's a bit of both? Regardless, you now realize that it's a blessing you've been taking for granted, because today...
You broke a Pinkie Promise.
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Aww 🥰
So cute
This is so heartwarmingly sweet. You write Pinkie well, despite not writing her often. She feels just right, and I love how Anon cares about her so much. I started this fic thinking it would be more comedic, and by the end I’m unable to escape the d’aww. This is a really good sequel. I love that segment with Rarity.
Yet another adorable piece of yours to add to my collection. For someone who doesn't write Pinkie that often, you did a wonderful job here. The cheerful greeting before getting mad, the anger quickly going away and being replaced by sadness and concern. All very Pinkie things to do, and I loved seeing your interpretation of her. You should write her more often
One tiny mistake I noticed:
Man, it made my morning so much better waking up to this story. Like I said yesterday (I think?), I feel Pinkie Pie doesn’t get enough love. But the stories you manage to write do her so much justice, I absolutely love it! Excellent work
Anon is a stupid simp, he got some ponyelse forcing him to propose to his lover, he let rarity decide for him what to do and when to do it, as if she has any say in the matter whatsoever or any right to get involve at all, Anon should have just told her to not get involved in someone's else's loves life.
Aw, wholesome as hell! My heart!
What better way than to start one's day than with a story from RunicTreetops. Always delivers, and this one is no exception!
Im sorry HE'S DEAD!
That was awesome and so wholesome in all the best ways thank you for this read runic.
I went into this fic expecting to see some wacky hijinks as Anon ran from Pinkie Pie, but as soon as he grabbed that box, I had a hunch I knew where this was going. Great job.
Aaaw, this is just sweet.
A great way to start the morning before work.
Best pinkie fic ever!
Last line should have been Pinkie jamming frosting directly into Anons eye holes, but the rest is good.
5/10 I expected Pinkie to give Anon ocular damage via the application of confectionaries at moderate velocities, and i was disappointed
I was expecting Pinkie Maguire to put some cake in someone’s eye
nobody had cake put into their eyesockets.
My Disappointment is Immeasurable and my Day is ruined.
edit: goddamn I read and commented on this previously already back in 'nam 2023💀