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Seeker Of Knowledge


Just a guy with a phone and original characters

Comments ( 31 )

I'm liking it but slow down just a bit, describe things a bit more, maybe. What exactly does it mean by six eyes?

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Well that’s to be discovered, but it’ll make sense in due time

You have my attention Herma Mora.:trixieshiftright:

Please tell me he learns there language or just makes them realize he is like them

Ok, I like this. For all our sakes, please be careful.:ajsleepy:

A bit rushed for a start, but overall is very good. Hope this gets updated as often as possible

Is that a Jojo reference?

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Everything is a JoJo reference

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Our whole existence is.

Also, may I ask you not use = to indicate a scene transition? If you use the local text-to-speech function it is really annoying to hear it's saying "equals-equals-equals-equals-equals-equals..." like some sort of Glimmer priest.

This story kinda like mine but it on YouTube but god work I hope at you never give up on this story and if you run out of ideas for chapter ask someone they might just have something for you

Your Human and You

lol

Princess Applejack

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Well, I gotta say. This is somewhat interesting.:ajsmug: But I must ask, what will you do next?

I liked the way you made Twilight call the human an 'Alpha'. It sounds like you are making a comparison to wolves, and humans in this story are like pets/pit fighters.:rainbowdetermined2:

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Don’t spoil everything, let other people draw conclusions my friend

I think the "Six Eyes" the story is referring to is protagonist's two eyes, then from what I assume is to be epitaphs two eyes, and then most likely king crimson's eyes.

{Sigh} Ok, I'm just going to throw it out there. But, when are you posting a new chapter? Not that I'm impatient or anything, I just want to see what happens next. Besides, after watching the 'Call of the Wild' film along with Netflix movie 'White Fang', I've grown into my 'inner wolf' if you know what I mean.

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Sorry about that, I’ve been working on both this story and RES since I’ve gotten my motivation back and mixed with reacclimating myself to life as a civilian and trying to write these while finding work again... I’ll get back to it this week don’t worry.

Ok, I waited over a week and you haven't kept your promise. When are you posting something?:ajbemused:

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I’ll be completely honest, I want to fully pay attention to finishing the last arc of my other story so that I don’t have to continuously switch my writing style back and forth. I promise that this story will not die but patience is a virtue

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It’s more so Your Human and You with heavy RGRE implications. Except females are noticeably dimorphic from males and this one defies that natural occurrence in Equestria

Are you going to finish this story

Comment posted by Seeker Of Knowledge deleted Sep 8th, 2020

is this really a displace storie?

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