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Keep moving forward and tell yourself the right story.

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It has been almost one year since Twilight Sparkle ascended to rule Equestria along with her friends. The turbulent times are behind them, even if the year has been shaky at best. With the Grand Galloping Gala rolling out soon, she is eager for a relatively straightforward night with her former mentor.

That plan, however, falls through when the mother of said mentor smashes the party and a chunk of Twilight's jaw.

Mahogany Bloodmist, Queen of the Vamponies and mother of the two retired princesses, turns out to be a much more abrasive pony than Twilight could have ever anticipated, and that's putting it mildly. Yet her presence puts into motion a series of unexpected turns that forever change the lives of those around her. Twilight is going to need to find a way to earn her respect and friendship if she has any chance of survival.

All the while, Starlight Glimmer becomes intertwined in the history surrounding the circumstances of her childhood.

And could Discord be more ingrained in these events more than even he knows?

Chapters (8)
Comments ( 16 )

The princess, twilight sparjle, got owned, got ooowned, a princess fractured skull, got owned, got owned, got ooowned~
I am enjoying this so far!

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Hey there, I'm glad. I spent the majority of 2020 planning out the project, hopefully, it meets your expectations. I am especially excited about later chapters. >:3

Also look out for artwork to be added later, it's gonna be gradual but I intend to put it out there.

10703926
Ooooh, i look forwards to watching your plans unfold! If i come accross any artwork that may be appropriate i will let you know!

10703960
Sorry, I should've worded that better. I will be drawing the artwork and adding it gradually as they are finished.

10703962
XD no problems, ^^ have fun drawing!

The synopsis confuses me... Celestia and Luna clearly aren't vampires, but their mother is one...? Are they adopted or something?

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We will find out the deal in a later chapter and your question will be answered properly, but long story short pretty much yes.

This chapter was worth the wait, good night now.

Very entertaining, looking forward to more!

11407342
Hey thank you! Glad you're enjoying! :pinkiehappy:

I wonder what Twilights Mark means. I assume another pony of great significance had that mark, which is why Bloodmist is so perplexed.

I really wanted to read this, but the fact it wasn't updated in a while kinda put me off. Now that there's been an update on it, I'm going to read it right now! It seems interesting just from the premise, not seen a Vampony be the Sisters mother before.

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Hiya, glad to see your interest. I've just been very busy with a lot of things and the stress from my job doesn't leave me with a lot of energy these days. :twilightblush:

I'm working on the next chapter, it just might be some time as I have other priorities these days. I don't have a set update schedule for this story, I just put out the chapters when they're done and I write when I have the time and energy. I'm determined to get this story done though, it's a personal matter to me.

Mahogany Bloodmist, Queen of the Vamponies and mother of the two retired princesses,

Before I read this, I must know: Does this mean that Celestia and Luna are also vamponies? If so, it’s very ironic considering everything about Celestia.

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They're adopted and are not related by blood [to the rest of the family]. That said, their family doesn't see that as an obstacle and aren't treated any differently. :pinkiesmile:

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