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You’re aware that in story creation you can actually link sequels? There’s a box to put the link to a story’s prequel in.

nice story plot

Cant wait for next chapter))

Not bad at all.

Here's an idea, maybe you'll like it: To work towards this goal, Celestia also approaches Cheerilee and the kids at school, most of who are Spike's friends, and starts corrupting them too. Cheerilee gets twisted into teaching the boys and girls about proper dominance and submission, respectively, and how they are to support Spike when the time is right.

Love this story and all of your works.

Great chapter! Cant wait to see next one))

Nice chapter.

How about a scene with Diamond Tiara and Silver Spoon? Like, they were just making fun of Snips and Snails when the gas hit; the fillies, suddenly feeling both guilty and submissive, beg the colts to punish them. They tie their hands and put them over their knees for a spanking, after which the fillies promise to be their slaves to make it up to them.

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Did you forget what happened to sliver spoon in my story. Princess Luna Griffin slave

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She was glanced over quickly there, so you will have to forgive me for not remembering.:trollestia:

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Of course I will forgive you.


But I am sorry about your idea I have something else in mind so once again I am sorry

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Oh no no, it's alright, please don't feel like you have to feel sorry or anything! If you like it, you could switch out Silver Spoon for Babs Seed, for example. I'm curious to see what you'll put in, though, even if it's something completely different.

Big Mac goes and tames Cheerilee, Zecora or Diamond Tiara.

Does your Ponyville have a police station? With all the cuffs lying around and the cells ready, that could lead to some kinky fun very quickly if the male cops start arresting the female ones, or random mares off the street, for that matter. In the same manner, we know Ponyville has a hospital with a mental ward. Have the male doctors, like Doctor Horse, put the female patients and nurses, like Redheart and Sweetheart, in straitjackets to "cure" them of not wanting to be slaves to the stallions for the rest of their lives.

Another amazing chapter.

I fully endorse Babs Seed becoming a slave to Snips and Snails. More bondage is also welcome.

You defiantly know how to write good stories, can't wait to see what will happen.

In fact, here's another interesting story beat for you: Say a few of the younger ponies are hiding a cellar. Like, say, Pipsqueak and Featherweight. The zebras send out a few young fillies of their own to 'recruit' any reluctant colts. A zebra filly finds them and coaxes them into letting her in, lying about how she's only there to help (from her perspective, it wouldn't even BE a lie!). As the gas sets in (they opened the door, after all) she gets flirty with them until they crack and begin to ravish her, becoming her masters for life.

Great chapter! Cant wait to see next one) Author great job !!!

Diamond Tiara with a diamond dog, i never saw that coming.

I gotta ask, is Spike going to get any more girls like Gabby or Ember?

And maybe read the chapter before releasing it, and make the story to make sense

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Did you read the dragon's harem

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Yes, but then why is there the main picture of Spike and one of the main character tags is Spike? It just makes people wonder, even with the last story, it make little sense on wasting the picture and a tag for a character that may or may not show up until the end

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Zecora is already caught.

wow ms shy this is getting good.

Wow this was a good chapter, i would have never thought he was going after Celestia

holy shit this was hot.

" It's from Strong Snow master he says that the fog is growing bigger than you thought. He also says that he is already getting reports that it has reached the Crystal Empire, the griffin kingdom, and the rest of Equestria's cities and towns. "

That made Kip smile even more so. " Well I was wondering when that would happen. "

Did Lip just double cross Strong Snow?

Nice chapter.

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Nope just wants to have more mares for his harem

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Oh. Pity. Or good? I'm kinda on the fence about this whole thing.

I want to know who the "lucky" male will be to get Cozy Glow, and how they will break and change her 😈

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Did you read my, No lose ends, story

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I did, I just had to reread to remember. On that you could have a multi-timeline portal open up and alt'd villianess could come out only to fall into Celestia's hands and be Conditioned for Spike after he becomes King as his coronation gift.

not bad, enjoyed it greatly.

Wow each time you improve, this was awsome.

Well, I do appreciate more bondage, like I said before. That gives the chapters some variation; they are pretty similar otherwise.

Now, you didn't pick up the hospital idea (too bad :rainbowlaugh:), but there are other places left! For example, the vet. Run by the mare, Doctor Fauna. And you know what else is around vets? Collars, leashes, cages... heck, they probably have restraints lying around a closet. Some guy could just walk in and make her a literal pet. And if you want to go really pervy, there's probably a male doggie around or two, to help put her in her place.

Comment posted by The Great Derpsby deleted Nov 20th, 2019

Wow nice chapter.

I hope Flash Magnus gets Sonambula.

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Part of me is hoping Angel Bunny gets Winona and Opal. It would be weird as all heck, but fit the story perfectly.

wow nice chapter.

Yay! I suggested this!

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You did!

Now... we'll see if the thing with my suggestion happens too. :trollestia: And if it needs a good setup, have them currently at Doctor Fauna's place, who can then be enslaved right away too. So many collars, leashes, cages and other restraints lying around, just begging to be used. Would be fun, no?

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I don't think Angel needs the mist to make him do it though. Just watch that one episode.

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