*Set in Season 4*
Based on that Live-Roleplay at Brony-Con in 2010 (which isn't copyrighted)
Spike and Rarity travel to Las Pegasus to have a small and simple wedding, which may be fraught with potential worry of others who may not take the joining so well.
I noted formatting issues in some places, the working got awkward, there were some grammatical errors and the song was probably extraneous. I'm not even sure what the title's parenthetical has to do with anything. It's mostly inoffensive and expected.
Family Guy inspired Alternate Ending
The lava was getting closer, coming in from all sides, and the friends were hopeless to escape—Twilight had not enough magic, and she as well as Rainbow and Fluttershy were too exhausted to life the friends all up high enough to fly to safety.
“We’re done for!!
WE’RE DONE FOR!!!” Pinkie shouted.
The lava got closer still, and the heat was unbearable.
“Spike…!!” Rarity cried as she clutched him tightly.
“Rarity…!
Rarity…!!
…RARITY!!!”
Spike shouted her name as they were about to be consumed by the lava and then we cut to all of them sitting on a couch in the hotel lobby.
Spike: "Boy that was crazy."
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I accept your comment as "Not really Praise" therefore, it may stay
is it ok to have completly neutral comments?