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Coronet the lesser


"Writing is easy. All you do is stare at a blank sheet of paper until drops of blood form on your forehead." ~Gene Fowler

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This story is a sequel to Idol


In a world of rapid change, a little confectionery store has become wedded to the hearts of the residents of Ponyville.

Its owner, Pinkie Pie, has brought endless joy and laughter to her town for many years. However, when the Corner runs into trouble, Pinkie faces an uncertain future.

She's not worried.

As long as she can do what she loves.


Huge thank you to EverfreePony who edited this piece.

*Set 15 years after Season 9*

*A companion piece to Idol*

Artwork is not owned by me, all credit goes to wingflyte

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Comments ( 6 )

Sad but uplifting. Hopefully Pinkie doesn't lose the shop again. She's being too stubborn not asking for help. It was literally the first thing AJ learnt back in the day

9804074

I wouldn’t say stubborn, I’d say she’s just trying to be an adult. Considering the past I outlined for her in this story, I think Pinkie Pie has an aversion to involving those close to her with her finances. Pound only knows because just happened to be there.

Thanks you! :twilightsmile:

Excellent job on the latest installment to your series. The exchanges and characterizations are quite well done. And, yeah, I can understand Pinkie's reasons for holding out the way she has. Mr. Potter might be a good business-stallion, but that's literally ALL he has going for him, while Pinkie, at least, still has her family and friends. And, speaking of those friends, yeah, Pinkie actually DOES have a point concerning her friends' accomplishments. Pound's chats with Pinkie were great too.

All in all, I'll definitely be looking forward to the next story in this series.

9804649

Thank you very much! :pinkiehappy: so glad you enjoyed it!

Great story.

"A Pinkie promise can't be broken Pound," she said with a giggle. "You know the rules."

Okay, first off. They're only rules. The only thing that would actually happen is that Pinkie wouldn't be happy about it, but that's it.

People seem to act like she would be the snot out of them or something. Or that there's some kind of magic involved in it. It's not a Geass.

Just had to get that out of my system. Great story though.

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