(Takes place of an MLP animation called "Ponyville Incident" by BrutalWeather)
Ponyville and Twilight's Castle is destroyed thanks to Applejack's mistake kicking the football very hard, miss the goal and made a huge mess on Ponyville. What will everypony react?
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Discord/MJ Smuv should react to "A Ponyville Incident"
Not bad. Ease up on the question marks and exclamation marks though.
I guess this is sort of accusation fic for Ponyville Incident.
To be fair, the video was meant to be comedy/slapstick stuff..... I think.
Well, good job on it.
I thought Double Rainbow was more destructive. I am thoroughly corrected.
Also:
Twilight, eat your snickers. You turn into a raging alicorn when you're hungry!
(That's DangerDean saying the above line.)
Not bad, but I don't think Twilight really apologized as well as she should have. I mean, Bon Bon seemed to feel worse about trying to punch Lyra. Twilight straight up tried to kill Applejack! Her apology just didn't seem as genuine in comparison
Considering what I had to work with, turned out rather welll.
I feel like this shows how Applejack is a better friend than twilight, she could have easily threw her under the bus and told them how twilight tried to kill her, the same way twilight threw her under the bus by saying she did it.