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Silas5399


Just another guy that writes and games as a hobby

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Dear Twilight. I am relieved that you and your friends are alright, and the appearance of this diamond worries me greatly. But we can not be quick to judge, based on his actions he is good, but we must observe it for now and decide what to do. Now that is where you come in, you will watch its behavior and report its actions to me. From you teacher Celestia.

How can she already tell it’s a he

And finally the difference between versions: no ArkKane co-writing.

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we are trying to stick to what we were doing before

Carpbaskets i thought the request edit
Was a download link :facehoof:.
sorry harlock

What do you mean "a" Red Diamond? The Diamonds are all unique, there's only one of each color.

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Most gems vary in color but have the same powers if they are the same gem the diamonds are the same kind of gem and have the same powers so they are unqiue among gems that have the same powers when they have differant powers

Great the bloody pony's has stolen what's left of black diamond what is the for that to happen is it for creating their own sentient gems or something else

are ye going to add a phosphophyllite in this fic?

I like this story. It made me want to follow you.😁😜

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Thanks but draco and me haven't really been talking lately i have been trying to talk to him but he wasent reaonding to my messages

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That sucks. I would Love it if this story were to progress.

This would be a interesting read but the pacing is so bad harlock I mean one second we are doing one thing the next we are elsewhere there is no character development it’s just oh look I know how to do this now and the fact that he just gave up and accepted his new life not even seeming to keep the original person we started with witch I can see as being hard since there was no real development of him there either it was just “oh look merchant give me diamond now I fall into the ground and wake up all powerful knowing how to make myself a construct right away and run away” I don’t know much about SU lore or anything but ya just hope in assuming we know it and don’t even tell us it’s a SU crossover in the introduction thing on the chapters page. I am sorry but I shall end it here. I hope ya get people who enjoy this without issue but for me I can’t so with that good luck.

Update please?

Wait a minute fire = heat, Super heat = plasma. By that logic shouldn't he have at least some control over plasma. He my not have full control, but at least enough control over plasma to move it. He may not be moving stars anytime soon but at least he'll be able to control the amount of plasma that he can make at to like the tip of his finger by concentrating his fire to such a degree that it turns into plasma. Making it a deadly laser pointer.

Would've been nice to see more chapters

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