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Ordering underlings to kiss is wrong, but physical violence towards them is a-okay in Luna's book.
Glad I'm not one of her subjects.
Well, that was... interesting.
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Did I mention this isn't any good? It isn't any good.
Nice.
gotta say, I was a bit worried based on the opening that it was gonna turn into some diatribe about the real world, but you pulled it off. I hope there's some more to come.
I'm one of the contest judges just coming in to leave some of my notes about your story.
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Overall I liked it.
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Thank you for your thoughts! I agree with you that this fic could be a lot better -- when I had the original idea it was going to continue, but then I started writing it and unfortunately it turned out I just... wasn't into it. Which is a shame, but oh well, them's the breaks. I'm glad you enjoyed it, though!