Trixie invites Glimmer over for a tea party...with pine cones.
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Okay first you get points for not doing a HIE or Displaced yourt first story. 99% of first time authors do I've seen. Look them up if you don't know what those are.
But then you loose all of them because you refuse to use Starlight's first name at all and yet Trixie's is used.
Upvoted because I do like it.
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Edited, do I get those points back?
Just curious.
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Yeah. Kind of annoying the first time. Much better now.
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Thank you for the criticism!
Helps me add things to my do and don't list.
This is great for a first story.
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Came up with it because my sister thought Milk went with donuts, I kept hinting at she should be using cookies.
But she just looked at me like I was the weirdo.
I wonder why this makes less sense than any of my crack fics to me
Not that that’s a bad thing, just that I’m half asleep, this the first story in New I’ve read in ages and it’s quite a fun read. Props to you, you got a chuckle out of me!
Also, don’t put too much merit on making Featured and Popular. I made that mistake when I first hit the box and my resulting stories suffered for it. Besides, you hit the box with the stories you least expect!
Happy writing, allons-y!
This is a pleasant, straight-up friends-doing-stuff story for Starlight and Trixie, who don't get nearly enough play, since there's a lot of potential scope for comedy in their friendship. Nicely done!
What, no peanut butter, Trixie?
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Funniest thing I did have peanut butter on this but removed it, thought warm butter next to peanut butter sounded redundant.
946932 Don't be a Tryhard Triscuit, got it!
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I know, they have such a genuine bond.
Love any chance to see them together.
you know? this would almost make for a wonderful children's book!
if only it didn't promote the consumption of pine cones...
Alondro senses something new, something fresh… "Hello there... frrrrriennnnd."
Pinecones are not as tasty as one might think. As a denizen of the NJ Pine Barrens, I can attest to this from experience.
It's an older meme, sir, but it checks out.
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No kidding. Haven't seen this one in a long time.
9470928 Leave them to me. I will deal with them myself. (Darth Baker stalks off to his ovens...)
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Sometimes it's nice to dust off an oldie but a goodie!
You could stand to find an editor, but I was very pleased to see pinecones come back into fashion. :) This was cute!
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Ty!
Ah, but here's the real question - is it 'koans' or 'kons'?
Being a Northerner, I am obliged to pronounce it Tea and Cons, which sounds even more like Trixie than Tea and Cones.
I've reviewed your story HERE!
Greetings. I hope you don't mind, but I did a reading of your story, which can be found below. I hope you enjoy.