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Yuum


Otaku anime and Manga. so much imagination to draw and write,

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After opening his first academic duel in Ponyville. Twilight and his friends can teach each creature the basics of the duels but the AAE is against this project because creatures can use against them to invade Equestria and hire duelist clandestine to close the school.

Whose go they managed to saved the academy and prevent the closure?

Chapters (19)
Comments ( 34 )

This going base often anime or no?

More based mlp character are duelist

Yuum, please find an editor. The way you have things spaced makes it hard to read, and you also have many times of not capitalizing proper nouns, such as Princess and Chancellor.

Is the synopsis an indication of your spelling? Because if so, I’m not sure I want to see the actual fic.

Is English your first language? Because I can't even get past the description to read the story because it's so badly written.

I agree. Plz find an editor. I like it but it's just... it can be better. Love the idea though and what it can become.

This story has promise...but like said before it needs an editor. Spelling and grammar are issues as well as the pacing

Very interesting. The story not only has a kind of Yu-Gi-Oh! GX feel but also comes off just like you would be watching the show over reading a story about the show. Quite clever.

I'll be following. :)

Lacks details, you use very minimal description so it lacks at sort of impact. That lack of detail makes the pace very fast, it feels like nothing really happened.

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Is only the first chapter...
And trie to make a good sypnosie...

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It's a good first draft.

I hate the Link cards but great story so far

I really enjoy the Yu-Gi-Oh! feel you give this story. It's fun to read such a crossover and I'm glad you got around to a Chapter 2.

Cozy Glow as a duelist? I wonder if she'd duel like Bakura? Though I have a feeling she'd enjoy using manipulative cards like 'Brain Control', 'Change Of Heart', and 'Enemy Controller'. She may even have 'Lava Golem' to add o the pain as Lava Golem allows the player to tribute two opponent monsters to special summon. Then you have, I think, the Helpoheimer monster that, when destroyed, goes into your opponent's graveyard and makes them randomly lose a card in their hand during the Stand By phase.

Oh, how fun it would be to build a deck themed after Cozy Glow's personality. :)

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For Cozy Glow had planned a special deck for her, for the moment she does not have a deck but in a future chapter, yes.

This story is very exciting as, in reading it, you are able to see the Yu-Gi-Oh GX style as the duels, unless extremely important, do not tend to take an entire episode.

In your story, we get a really fun take on ponies and dueling. You leave lots of room for imagination as you animate the scenes so they are just like in the show. Monster goes on the field, you see its stats. Player loses life points, you see the life points drop.

Thanks for writing and sharing. :)

intresting i'm just a guy who is a fan of incredbly dinamic books and media

Ooh! This match is getting intense! So glad to see the story continuing.

There are so many cards I have yet to see, or even know about. I really need to look at the card finder to see if, maybe, I can 'proxy' a theme deck.

Do you have a particular favorite series for 'Yu-Gi-Oh!'? I liked "GX" the most. It was fun. Unfortunately the English version of the final season was never made. :( Thanks 4Kids.

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I like yugioh vrains and I started to watch yugioh sevens.
And for this chapter I working very hard to make a simility of yugioh where the main character meet is rival for the first time

Where is the cover art from?

Wow! Lots of action in this chapter! Lots of fun with, if I guess right, foreshadowing of worlds crossing over.

It will be exciting to see where the story goes next.

Joker certainly is pleased at his students. It reminds me of how Alister was being lead by 'The Order of Light'.

Good story.

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Thank you Yosh, I trie my best To make good like all the yugioh serie.

Oh, yeah! You really feel the thrill of a Yu-Gi-Oh! GX episode going on here. I do like how the 'bodygurad' left as a result of having his contract run out. Just goes to show you should always pay for the maximum amount of protection. Or, in the leader's case, he should have sprung to pay for an extra hour. :)

Sand Bar was definitely in trouble. However he had some great plays to save himself. He plays like Joey Wheeler. Sand Bar would make a great Joey.

Most interesting. Some additional depth is coming into view for our characters.

Atem did rely very heavily on Dark Magician. It is a great card, but only with the proper cards to support him. Fortunately he also has 'Black Luster Soldier' and 'Dark Magician Of Black Chaos'. Though those are a bit harder to summon.

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Your writing ability has improved over the time you have been writing this series. It always makes me happy to see a writer evolve in their writing. Great job! :)

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Thank you Yosh-E-O

when I write I do my best to make a series that combines card games and school life. I am inspired by anime from high school stories.

Dragon monsters always get the spotlight because their the best kind of duel monster. The other duel monsters rarely ever get a chance to show their stuff off like, "Elemental HERO Neos" and "Dark Magician".

This chapter is inspired by the yugioh 5ds episode. when jack altas fights a familiar in order to gain new power

This was amazing when the next. chapter is going to come. And im liking the Story So Far

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Thank you
The next chapter will be out later

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Well okay them and im can't wait for It to come Also me im like using red dragon Archfiend deck. Even im still love using red Supernova dragon. And others red dragon synchro cards like scarlight and Abyss and bane and rural and red nova dragon and king Calamity as well too even im like three red rising dragon

Whose go they managed to saved the academy and prevent the closure?

What do you mean by that?

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