Unexpected Life of Young Changeling Who Be Raised By A Family Pony

Discover the incredible life and childhood had Eclipse Sparkle, a young changeling princess who was raised by her adoptive family Sparkle's.

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kildeez

kildeez #1 · Sep 28th, 2018 · 2 · 1 ·

That is literally the worst title I've ever seen on this site.

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Yuum #2 · Sep 28th, 2018 · 2 · 2 ·

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An title like Unexplected Life of Young Changeling Who Be Raised By A Family Pony is better or I still need to change?

kildeez

kildeez #3 · Sep 29th, 2018 · 1 · ·

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...English isn't your first language, is it?

First of all, you should definitely try writing in your native language. Writing requires a certain grasp of language that comes with speaking it for decades, if not your entire life. Without that natural grasp, most attempts at writing will wind up mediocre at best, and just embarrassing at most. I do encourage you to write, just in whatever language you call your own.

That being said, if you're going to insist on going ahead: "The Unexpected Life of a Young Changeling In A Pony Family." Still not the best title, but it's more concise. Also, it deletes the L you inserted into Unexpected. Why did you do that? No Spellchecker on Earth would put that there, it is not pronounced with an L, and it meant you had a spelling error right there in your title, THE FIRST THING SOMEBODY SEES WHEN THEY LOOK AT YOUR STORY. Why is that there?

Yuum

Yuum #4 · Sep 29th, 2018 · · 1 ·

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No really.But I try my best writte and I did not notice my mistake on the title with the L in Unexpected.

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