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Shy_Guy_Animat0r


Hello! I am an aspiring fanfiction author and have begun to start writing MLP fanfics. I am a fairly new writer so any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism is helpful!

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After the intense battle with Paradox, Judai Yuki decides to travel the world once more. However, as he travels back to his dimension, a strange energy saps him away into the land where Duel monsters
and large mystical creatures are wreaking havoc amongst the scared citizens. Unable to resist Judai must help them if he ever intends to find his way back to his world. Though Judai's deck is ready for anything it'll take more than just wits and talent...Judai; will have to attend school...AGAIN!? Oh well; yall know the routine. Grab your duel disks and get your game on; cause its time to D-D-D-D-D-D-D...DUEL!

(Based off after Yugioh 3D: Bonds Beyond Time)
[Also; name title is a WIP; any suggestions I will be gladly open to]

Chapters (3)
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Comments ( 18 )

Titles seems fine for now. I'll keep an eye out for this story

Not a bad start. The only thing that bugs me, more than it should to be honest, is Jaden being called by his Japanese name. I don't blame you for this, I'm just used to hearing his other name instead. Also, maybe have him ask for information about where he is in a calmer manner. I get that he's in another world, but that kind of behavior would only draw attention to him.

And followed, I'm really curious to see where this goes.

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So; would you like me to change his name to the English version or stay the Jap version.

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It's fine as it is, it just bugged me too much to leave it unmentioned.

Haha great job on the reference of the shows:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:
Get your game on; cause its time to D-D-D-D-D-D-D...DUEL!

This is good. I like it. Keep going.

I'm interested to see where this will go. Although this is just a me thing, since I only watched the dub, every time I see Judai I see Jaden.

This is good. I loved GX. It was a good anime.

I saw you said that GX is the best one.....I agree.

I hope we get to some dueling very soon.

This has been quite interesting... Let's see ahere this goes...

P.S. What deck do you often use?

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I BRANCH FROM DIFFERENT USES, BUT IM MORE OF A GEN 1 - GEN 2 KIND OF GUY, YUGI MOTO STYLE DECK

So for Judia's deck will we just see the E Heroes/neo spaicians that are in the show or are there going to be heroes like shadow mist and solid soldier?

Nice story. Please continue it

The description of that figure Judai is about to duel reminds me of Trueman there in a way.

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