If someone told Twilight she would end up in any sort of relationship with a disorganized mismatch of colors made pony, she'd have called them insane.
(A 10 minute challenge fic where I write the adventures of Student Twilight and normal Dash. Chapters will be ultra short and will be TwiDash. Eventually.)
O-ho-ho! Nice idea! It's been a while since I've read a good TwiDash story.
The execution is solid, too.
I would love to read more!
This has golden potential and I want more
Hmm... So far, this isn't half bad (especially for chapters written in and around 10 minutes). It's short, yes, but interesting. Like, what was Dash doing in Canterlot, and what caused her to crash into Twilight's tower?
Either way, keep up the good work. I hope to see more of this, especially since it's an alternate history, pre-canon TwiDash! Those are sorta my favorite.
so far, very nice. I like how each chapter is switching pov.
Can't wait for the next chapter
And then little Twiggles does like a true introvert by being adopted by an extrovert and dragged, kicking and screaming, into friendship
Thats it i am in it to the end https://i.imgur.com/bhNML.gif i hope you have a Great day and i am looking forward to more cheers
More of this? Awesome!
Sometimes that's just how you write the best lines/paragraphs/pages.
They're going to fall for each other without even realizing it, won't they? Sure, it'll take a couple months at least - probably years - but it's going to creep on them both in equal measure
This has been fun so far, I look forward to seeing where it goes.
Loved this. It's beautifully flowing, and I love how each chapter is a scene and that it switches perspectives. Also, well done on capturing the character's, well, character!
Haha... Oh Rainbow...
Well these were fun. I love the alternating viewpoints and the perspective from pre-show era for these ponies. I wonder if Twilight will end up liking the show or not.
This is fun, with good potential for cute twidash moments. I'll have to follow this with hope for future updates
Thank you for writing this!
GIMME MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!