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Bendy


I like big ponies and I cannot lie.

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Discord breaks free once again with a new plan to steal a book from Canterlot to master Multiverse traveling in order to plunge all the Multiverse into eternal chaos.

The Mane Six along with the help of some new friends they make along the way as they journey through the Multiverse, using Multiverse tracking magic to track Discord's movements in the multiverse to chase Discord from universe to universe to try corner fleeing Discord and turn him back to stone again with the Elements Of Harmony.

Contains: Minor bad language in some places.

Note: I'm not a great fan fiction writer, so some better writer or team of writers are free to do their own probably far better version of this if they want. I'd like to see them.Blog Idea: Universe Jumping Discord

Also having Asperger's Syndrome and dyslexia plus going to a special school when I was a kid may had to my bad writing, and the fact I was illiterate till about the age of 15.

I know the screen grab promo picture isn't good, but I can't draw very good as well as write very good either.

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Comments ( 17 )

he will NEVER be able to master the gmod universe. :pinkiecrazy:

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Perhaps not, but maybe at some point he will master it as said in the fan fiction Discord becoming more powerful beyond our wildest imaginations.

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Edit Note: As I said in the description I'm not a great fan fiction writer, so some better writer or team of writers are free to do their own probably far better version of this if they want. I'd like to see them.

Also having Asperger's Syndrome and dyslexia plus going to a special school when I was a kid may had to my bad writing, and the fact I was illiterate till about the age of 15.

So, he plans to plunge every universe into chaos? :unsuresweetie:

Even though we're going on the "Discord is an OP MO FO:twilightangry2:" version, he's got his work cut out for him. :applejackunsure: I bid thee good fuckin luck.

Now to read the story. :pinkiehappy:

This is good.mawesome idea, story, and everything. All you need to do is put more description into it. If you do, by god, I'll make a cover art for this.

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Yep, that's his plan.

I hope you like the fan fiction, I hit writer's block though, and I'm not a great writer, so other far better writers or team of writers can make their own versions of this fan fiction if they want. I'd like to see them.

One question: What does "OP MO FO" mean?

*After Reading*
:ajbemused:
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:pinkiesick:

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I assume you thought it sucked?

1027849 It means Over Powered Mother Fucker.

They're two parts put together, OP for Over Powered, and MO FO for Mother Fucker. Why is it FO instead of FU? I personnally think FO makes it look better.

I doubt this will be featured like the rest of my fan fiction also not featured once, but I do think some other good fan fiction writer making their own version of this fan fiction will get featured.

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Really? Thanks very much. I'd like to see this cover art. I'll be sure to give credit to you for drawing it.

I edited the summary, what do you think?

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Thanks for that. I was wondering what you meant.

And as I said sorta before: I assume you thought this fan fiction sucked?

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Not just the summary, the whole fanfic. For example, the awaking scene was really instantaneous, also so was the way Celestia and the main six appeared. For example, I'll show you what I mean.

On a sunny day in the Canterlot Sculpture Garden the nervous onlookers the Royal Guard noticed small cracks beginning to occur on the statue of Discord.

Suddenly Discord smashed his way out of the statue sending small fragments of rock in all directions.

"Stop Discord!" shouted one of the Earth Pony Royal Guards charging at Discord with a longsword in his right hoof.

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The sky was clear, Celestia's sun shining down on Equestria. Many of the Ponies relished this time, for it was not often that the day was as beautiful as it is now. However, the beautiful day would soon turn disasterous, while no pony expected it. Canterlot, home to the princesses, would take the worst of it. The Canterlot Sculpture Garden, known for the magnificent pieces of art, was housing one of the most devious and selfish villains of all time. The two Royal Guards stationed there shivered at the sight before them, not sure on what to do.

Cracks were forming on the statue. They started off small, but soon began to grow, rising from the bottom of his two mismatched feet to his oddly shaped head. He chuckled darkly, his stone imprisonment shaking in its place. He would soon be free. After all, you never try the same trick on someone twice. People learn after the second time.

Suddenly, the right arm of Discord smashed his way out of the statue sending small fragments of rocks forward. He then using his free arm began to smash the surrounding stone easily. The cracked prison fell apart easily, the spirit of chaos sighing in satisfaction as the cool air brushed against his face. He enjoyed the momentary peace, the looked towards the two guards shaking in their armour as they looked at him. One regained his composure, taking a sword out of his scabbard.

"Stop Discord!" shouted one of the Earth Pony Royal Guards. He held the blade towards the draconequus, slowly approaching the villain. He only chuckled in response, a sinister grin plastered on his face.

"Only way to stop me is to catch me!" He replied tauntingly.

Boom. That's how the stuff should be done.

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That was really good.

It will take quite a lot of editing, rewriting, and time for me to do that. Time is something, I don't have that much of, so it may take a little time.

And that's exactly why other far better writers than me such as yourself and others should make their own versions of this fan fiction, cause I know my writing sucks when compared to almost everyone else on this site.

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No. I don't believe your writing sucks. No ones really does. You actually have out proper grammar into your fiction, so that is a big bonus to some of the trash lying around here. Just don't rush it, alright? I see great potential in this, and I wish to see where you go with it.

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I'll write more, edit and stuff to make it better. But I don't think it would be anytime soon.

I too see it's potential, I will write more at some point unless I'm killed during writing it. At the same time I'm looking forward to seeing other versions of this fan fiction from far better writers than me, who weren't illiterate till about the age of 15, and don't have Asperger's Syndrome and dyslexia nor went to a special school when they were a kid like me.

I have a good imagination, but not great skills in writing. Plus most of my fan fiction off this site on the Futurama Madhouse are in transcript/screen play format.

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I have a character in my Futurama fan fiction by the name of Universe Jumping Bender (Bender from Futurama) which inspired the title of this fan fiction: Universe Jumping Discord.

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Honestly, I can't wait. I'll see what comes up next in these chapters, but also, if you are too busy to write it, get an editor to do the extras for you.

My reaction is TROLOLOLOL. So much shit can come from this.
Good story :pinkiehappy: :derpytongue2:

Also having Asperger's Syndrome and dyslexia plus going to a special school when I was a kid may had to my bad writing, and the fact I was illiterate till about the age of 15.

Well come to the club https://www.fimfiction.net/group/210834/autisteaspergerautistic-poniesbronies

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