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Lesbianism, f/f, polyamory, toys, anal, oral, cunnulingus, futa, rough, public fucking, 3 dicks 1 mare, 4 dicks one mare, double anal, double oral, public use, cum swapping, scent, and lots and lots of orgasm denial

Marry me.

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*gets down on one knee*

That list of „features” alone is worthy of a fav and upvote.

You've piqued my interest.

Fuck this is so good. I love the relationship between the two, I love the absurdness of the situations, and I love that Celestia is taking advantage of Twilight.

I mean, I can't say anything was misleading about the description. It's right in the title, too. I just wasn't expecting the story to be so laser-focused on it. I'm sure your guy got what he paid for, but I think the audience for this is pretty narrow.

9234286
It opens up after the first two. The main theme still underlys it but it gains alot during the first real 'arc'.

You sick depraved person.....I love it, eagerly awaiting more.

9239495
Hey I didnt even come up with this one, I just fleshed it out.

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Oh heh, "Commission for patron." Yeah....should have fully read the description. Well, thank you for fleshing it out then.

How is "scent" a fetish?

The incest turned me off

I can't wait until twilight manages to get payback either by usurping Celestia's control of the spell, breaking the spell then casting it on Celestia or doing something that would give her control over Celestia.

Also isn't it suspicious that every alicorn other than Celestia all has heat so bad that removing it was the seemingly only solution and that Celestia conveniently had the only spell capable of doing it. Now I'm not saying Celestia created a spell to A) make their heats worse and B) implant the idea that she might be able to help before casting it on them. While also creating a "counter spell", but I am also not saying that couldn't have happened.

Yer I can't wait for the turnabout.

I love this story. It reminds me of friendship is kind control. I shall wait for more

Ok, having a plotline entirely about Twilight just not wanting to be under the spell anymore makes the whole thing pretty rapey on Celestia's part and not in a fun way. It's just getting really uncomfortable. And it isn't in the kink list.

BRUH SHE HAVEN'T CAME IN FUCKING OVER A 1000 YEARS? The fuck is wrong with her sister the build up over time will shatter her fucking mind

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Well she was on the moon, and its been described more as a slumber, rather then her being conscious on the moon.

Who thinks Twilight is going to get ALL her friends and get independence from Celestia?

9300746
Hope so, Celestia is being almost worse than a troll by coming up with that spell. I hope that Twi learns that spell and uses it on Celestia

Too long

9300746
This would possibly be viable, if the spreading of the spell isn't just fuckery intended by her in the first place; it definitely seems preprogrammed to train Twilight into being a dom/switch and her friends into pets.

That leaves Applejack and Rarity.

9312046
That might be too harsh, but you might be right. It think the 2nd half of the story where she started interacting with her friends could've been a sequel to the first part.

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I dont really understand why people think this way, fimfiction has a good bookmark system, if your done reading simply bookmark it and leave. Then again I read alot so this doesnt really bother me.

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Lol, didnt expect you to respond so fast

9258066
Honestly, I was getting that from the first chapter when twilight had the spell done. The context could imply that this heat is the start of puberty/twilight was just becoming a young adult (later confirmed as twi is referred to as a teenager), does not put Celestia in a good light. Specially with the added context implying Celestia has been doing this for a while; since all it took was one command for twi to climb under the desk and eat her out

Too long to read in one go.

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Then you will be very happy to know that fimfiction has an absolutely wonderful feature called bookmarking that will keep your place.

Well this was a pretty sweat match up. I can't recall the last time I read a fic where AJ and Zecora were together in a serious relationship.

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Its one of my favorite ships.

9258066
I'm currently bored enough to mention to you that it is extreamly common for abusive partners to "reward" their victims for being complicit in their own harm by refraining from taking things from them that they have been conditioned to expect themselves not to have by default.

This was awesome so far and I can't wait to see more.

Now we know the real reason she tuned into Nightmare Moon.

I Luna gets bake at her sister..

I hope Twilight can find a way to get back at her.

So is it just Fluttershy and way is it happing in the first place

This is getting more and more interesting.

I hope Twilight master's the ins and outs of that spell.

This was epic and sweet chapter.

This was a sword chapter,and then there was one.

This story will be receiving daily updates for about a week, so look forward to that!

Comment posted by kingofqwop deleted May 2nd, 2020

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The fuck you talkin about?

Comment posted by kingofqwop deleted May 2nd, 2020
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