Flat Lives Matter

MA Dazzling Sunset
MLP: FiM
Equestria Girls
Comedy
Porn
After experiencing a rousing time on the other side of the mirror, Sunset returns to her high school and is confronted by Adagio of the Dazzlings. Instead of engaging in a fight, the two discover that they each share a love for the same fetish...
Sex
Fetish
Profanity
Human
Sunset Shimmer
Adagio Dazzle
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Ankaru

Ankaru #1 · Aug 26th, 2018 · 1 · ·

I gave a like because I too like flat chests on adult women.

Fuzzyfurvert

Fuzzyfurvert #2 · Aug 26th, 2018 · 2 · ·

u wat the wat m8

Arcfoxx

Arcfoxx #3 · Aug 26th, 2018 · 1 · ·

9132963 flat chested women are also my fetish so your not alone

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Princess Platinum Blonde

Princess Platinum Blonde #6 · Aug 26th, 2018 · · ·

This reads more like a first story than a 77th.

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Pinkamena666

Pinkamena666 #9 · Aug 26th, 2018 · · ·

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If you wanna see what my first fic looks like, check out this excerpt from Pinkamena and imagine this being the whole thing plus all the sequels

"WHERE AM I?!" she screamed.
"Right where I want you."
She looked up as light shown down through the hole.
"Pinkie Pie?" she asked "What's going on?"
"You're in a pit, silly."
"A pit?" she asked. "Why?"
"You wanted to be where Rainbow Dash is."
"Rainbow Dash is here?"
"Of course." said Pinkie Pie.
"But why the pit?"
"So you can't escape, obviously." said Pinkie Pie.
"Where's my horn?"
"You mean this?" asked Pinkie, pushing something over the edge of the pit.
The object fell in front of Rarity. It was her horn. Rarity looked back up at Pinkie Pie.
"What are you going to do?"

I've cringed at this before and it's my own fic.

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Princess Platinum Blonde

Princess Platinum Blonde #11 · Aug 26th, 2018 · · ·

9133747 I see you've released eight stories this month. Which is amazing, make no mistake; that's really, really impressive. But I can't help thinking that if you're that quick to move onto the next thing, you're not spending that long learning from the mistakes of the previous one?

Pinkamena666

Pinkamena666 #12 · Aug 26th, 2018 · · ·

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Actually some of the newer ones I uploaded are doing better than the older ones.
Even this one, which I was expecting to do horribly doc's I kinda rushed at the end, is actually holding at 50/50. I is surprised.

I'm actually taking a break from the FetishVerse to work on Pink, a horror mystery thriller I started 3 years ago. That one I tend to take my time with since it isn't a one-shot.

Also thanks for the honest critique ^^

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