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Arcane_Sigil
Arcane Sigil, Captain of the Twilight Guard. Husband to Princess Twilight Sparkle. Half Changeling. Magically Over Powered Badass.
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Not bad, though it did seem a little rushed. Maybe slow it down and put in more detail next time.
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It was a tad rushed, especially towards the end. I knew where I was going with the Twilight part, but the Pinkie part was spontaneous. Kinda like Pinkie herself. Just kinda happened. I'll slow it down a bit in the next chapter.
Definitely good so far, despite being a little rushed.
I love this chapter.
By the way, I do have an idea for how this particular fic should end. Mind if I sent it your way?
And the next victim will be Pinkie.
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Fire away. And not quite. Pinkie was in the first chapter, remember?
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Oh, right. Somehow it slipped my mind.
It's Rarity.
As for the final chapter, basically Dash decides to go one more round with everyone, impregnating them in the process.
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Free commission is yours, and I like that ending. I think I'll use it.
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Cool.
I'll PM you the idea.
This was a great chapter.
This was a great chapter, despite some reservations I have (mostly because I'm a huge SoarinDash shipper, but I'm setting that aside for this fic)
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I did consider having Dash seduce the Wonderbolts too, but then my brain thought "would she really seduce them? Or would she rather they came to her willingly?" Keep your eyes peeled for the answer.
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I'm pretty sure I'll like it either way
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In you opinion... would Luna and Celestia know what was going on? Or would they still be caught unawares? Like... the installation of thoughts that aren't theirs going un-noticed, or they know the thoughts were planted there by somepony else?
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I think they'd be aware, but not able/willing to do anything about it, either because they trust Dash too much or because she'd be too powerful.
Yet another great chapter.
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Two to go. And are you falling in love with my work?
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Yup
I'm not sure if this is my favorite chapter, but it IS the most interesting so far.
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I see you pretty much everywhere. You really comment on everything, eh?
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At least stories made for me.
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I try to comment on stories I like, which is a lot of them. I like books, I like reading, and I like MLP. Put the three together and I'm basically in love.
I'm confused. four legs or two legs?
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I think I bounced around a bit from four to two and back again, but I don't remember. Did you enjoy the story regardless?
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Not enough actual story to keep me
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I will admit I wasn't really going for "story" per say in this fic. More along the lines of "pure smut and fetish fuel." Think I nailed it?
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yeah
This was certainly an interesting installment.
And it gave me an idea for something to happen after the Spitfire chapter. I'll PM that to you when I get a chance.
As for the questions in the author's note:
1. Yes
2. Alicorn
3. Male
4. Normal
This was a great installment, and I eagerly await the next one.
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I've been considering Rainbow dominating a stallion. Had Big Mac in mind, since it would be a very large deviation from everything that is Big Mac, but Braeburn seems like a better option.
Is Starlight next? Or maybe go after Trixie or Maud?
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Currently, the next one in line hasn't been chosen yet, but she'll be determined by Amore, the original Princess of Love, so I'm balancing a scale between Starlight, who only knew "forced love" from her village until she met Twilight and her friends, or Trixie, who only knew Self Love until she met Starlight and the others.
I wasn't sure how to feel about the chapter at first, but the ending made me love it
Has the hypno/mind control element become irrelevant by now?
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Kinda sorta? She can still do it when she needs to, but at this point, it's kinda useless? I MIGHT use it in the next chapter, or in a later chapter, but it's up for debate at this point whether she needs to keep it.
Well I can thoroughly say I wasn't expecting THAT to be how things went
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Out of curiosity, what were you expecting?
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Something like just the sex between Spitfire and Dash, and then maybe in a later chapter it would be revealed that she's gotten pregnant.
But I still like it.
any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?
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I'm working on one at the moment, but I'm having internet issues while living at my aunts house until we find out own place. Just now, it took a few minutes for me to even connect enough to be able to comment on this. I do have a plan to have Dash either bone Mayor Mare, Smolder, or go after Octavia or Vinyl.
So, uh, any restrictions in who we can suggest?
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Literal only restriction is if they've already been used in a chapter.
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*Cough*
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*Cough*
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Adult Sweetie, or we talkin' foalcon?
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Adult would be nice
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Can do. Gave me an idea for three follow up chapters too. The CMCs.
I really liked this chapter. Then again, all the chapters are good. I like the idea of Rainbow having a harem or the mane six having a six way relationship.
That doesn't sound like Dash. But, this is a fan fic so I can't complain on her loyalty accuracy. I just didn't expect her to call her friends flings. Ouch.
Sorry. Still don't like Celestia so she override my hard on. Not even sexy Rainbow Dash can help me recover it. Damn you Celestia.
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Why don't you like Tia, if I might ask? Luna's my favorite OG Princess, Twilight's my favorite Ascended Alicorn, but Tia's a decent Princess.
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It's personal for some reasons, I question her rulership for others, we are basically polar opposites and so much more.