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An Angry Ostrich


I write garbage. Sometimes people want to read garbage.

Comments ( 19 )

I think it might be fun if, after he's had his fun with each of them, there's one additional chapter where they somehow get revenge on him.

Just an idea.

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Sometimes it’s better when the bad guy wins You know to have a taste for something different

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True.

Then again, the author CAN just give it both a good and bad ending for those who want it.

But it's what they want that matters most.

Tyl

Seems fun on the outside. But have to read the book to get a good glimpse.

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Who’s the say when the bad guy wins this time that is truly a bad ending I mean the girls to be happy in the end as long as he doesn’t kill any of them or be very abusive would it still be a bad ending ?

Really great start. The impregnation stuff especially was great. Looking forward to seeing more of Blue's escapades.

Not bad, but too short. I wouldn't mind longer sex scenes.

All right, first of all, you’re all degenerates (including me). I was honestly not expecting this story to get much attention at all. Secondly:


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Chapters 1 and 2 were written a year ago, so we’ll have to see if my writing has improved because of experience in other areas or gotten worse due to putting the genre aside for a while. It’ll be a learning experience! What fun!


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The tags for every chapter are there already. Draw whatever conclusions you may like from them.


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Glad you’re liking it!

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All right, first of all, you’re all degenerates

Flatterer :raritywink:

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But of course. I'm not above a bit of ego stroking for my audience.

Chapter 3 is in the works, and the build-up alone is 3 times as long. Granted, that's not saying much, but it does bode well for those of you who like a bit more atmosphere and charm to your dirty, filthy smut.

Enjoyable, but a bit quick. I wouldn’t have turn my nose up have a bit more of struggle, Rainbow trying to maintain her identity against the potion or something. But, I’m always down for having my favorite kinks served, namely non-con impregnation.

Comment posted by FicFacFlac deleted Apr 2nd, 2019

Would love to see more of this, any news on chapter 4? :twilightsheepish:

any idea when we can expect an update and new chapter?

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Today apparently.

Welcome back!

This was a different setup compared to the previous chapters. I wonder what's next for them?

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I’ve got a fairly hard turn towards plot planned, but the real twist is that I was planning it all along

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