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Citrus Recluse


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Is it only these two installments, or is it marked "Complete" because each chapter is one story?

Because if there is more to come, then I'd love for there to be a chapter where she falls under Starlight's control.

So what happened to Twilight and Spike then?

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You are correct, sir.

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Each chapter is one story. And this was a commission, so I probably won't be doing a Starlight chapter unless someone (like you, maybe) commissions it.

I do like that idea, tho' ...

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I'd gladly commission it, but I don't have the money.

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Well...

Go find someone who does and also wants to see it! 😛

Why’d you didn’t put transformation tag on the first page?

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You wanna know the truth?

You can't handle the truth!

I forgot.

With the way you’re describing everything, I’m getting the impression that it’s an anthro fic, but there’s no anthro tag, so you may want to add that.

I WOULD commission you....but I am broke.

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At least 30% of the reason I started commissions was because there were artists I wanted to commission but I was also broke. So I get that.

I vote for a Twilight Sparkle or Luna/Nightmare Moon chapter with futa and slutification.

Do you think you could do a sequel involving Luna getting mind controlled and dominated?
There are not nearly enough Luna mind control stories.

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While I agree there aren't enough Luna mind control stories, this story was a commission, and I am unlikely to add on to it unless someone commissions me to do so.

This is really good, but now I'm curious, what were some of the things the commissioner asked you to remove? I dabbled with commissions myself, and I know how a story sometimes gets away from ya, heh.

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Because Celestia doesn't get TFed in the first part

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