This was certainly an interesting installment. And it gave me an idea for something to happen after the Spitfire chapter. I'll PM that to you when I get a chance.
As for the questions in the author's note: 1. Yes 2. Alicorn 3. Male 4. Normal
So has this just stopped being a mind control story because the last 3 chapters have had nothing to do with the "hypno" in the title and that hasn't come up except in a passing comment regarding Twilight and the potion so it feels like a bit of bait and switch with titles and description after the first couple chapters.
This was certainly an interesting installment.
And it gave me an idea for something to happen after the Spitfire chapter. I'll PM that to you when I get a chance.
As for the questions in the author's note:
1. Yes
2. Alicorn
3. Male
4. Normal
Countryside
So has this just stopped being a mind control story because the last 3 chapters have had nothing to do with the "hypno" in the title and that hasn't come up except in a passing comment regarding Twilight and the potion so it feels like a bit of bait and switch with titles and description after the first couple chapters.