It's one thing to know that you're dying. It's another that you know that no one cares about you.
It's one thing to know you're sick and weak. It's another to know that you have no one to fall back on.
It's one thing to know you've met a goddess. It's another to be completely in love with her.
It's one thing to know you've fallen long ago. It's another to know that you've fallen so far.
My first ever multi-chapter fic to be published, and also an admittedly lame way of introducing my OC.
Cover art is by johnjoesco on DeviantArt.
Chapters (1)
I find this story quite intriguing and would like to see the next part of it.
I'm no expert at language, but I think you need some editing for this chapter, like multiple characters talking in the same paragraph.
Otherwise, I think this a good read
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Just curious, what's wrong with multiple characters talking in one paragraph? Is that... not accepted grammar-wise? If so, I never knew that.
9042887
Truth be told,
it's sometimes is, it's sometimes not.
The link above doesn't explain about the exceptions tho
I dunno what your talking about, but I liked this opener.
9043013
Did you mean you didn't understand the story or you didn't understand our previous conversations/comments?
9043081
Neither, you said
And I'm saying I liked it