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Bahamut0


I'm a fan of Yu-Gi-Oh!, a few other anime, and videogames. That being said, hope you enjoy my stories!

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This story is a sequel to EoH Evolution: Season 2


Following the events of the Royal Wedding Incident, a majority of the changeling population have defected from their hive due to the actions of Queen Chrysalis. However, that was not the only unintended consequence. Narico, the same nymph who stood against Chrysalis during the wedding, has now become the first changeling king.

The young king has a monumental task before him: integrating his people to become citizens of the kingdom of Unity. But this is by no means an easy attack. Following the attempted invasion, most are wary of Narico and his people. Despite their being little or no choice given to their involvement. Not only will Narico have to deal with that, but he'll also need to dismantle the suppressed life that changelings have been subjected to since the day they were born. But then again, nothing worth doing is ever easy. And he's not in this task alone.

Narico and Night Fang are owned by MLPFan1.
Silk Snare, Carapace, and Constrictor are owned by me.

Chapters (7)
Comments ( 40 )

Great first 2 chapters I enjoyed the second chapter especially the funny ending it had to but other then that it’s nice seeing Narico showing how nice of a king he is being

9034378
Thanks. though the results of my poll suggest that I move on to season 3.

9035143
Sweet looking forward to seeing it

9035148
Honestly? I'm starting to question this interlude feels necessary. I get that time skips are a thing, but do you think that cuts out any of the development?

9035157
Well I feel like this is necessary to see how things are different in the changlling kingdom and Narico adjusting to being the new king/royal

9035161
Good to know. Could you PM me suggestions for the plot? Make sure it's a new PM. I don't want to mix it up.

9035182
Well I feel like you should just keep going what you are doing for this interlude like in the last 2 chapters

9035184
You mean show Narico's adjustment and the changelings', right?

9035192
Yeah you are doing good job of it so far...but if i did have to suggest one thing I would say that even though you said she will be appearing time to time and give him a kiss on the cheek at the end I do want to see some moments where it shows some foreshadowing of Narico ending up together with abyss... like something were he feels happy that he sharing love and seeing others happy he still feels a bit empty inside feeling he missing something witch that something is someone to show his love to while having someone showing love to him

9035203
Next chapter's up.

This was great both new chapter were amazing and love the inspection speech on this chapter to that Narico Gave to to the Changllings to get them to turn into there different skin color

9035403
Thanks. Not a lot of people like the interlude though. Probably because they were expecting something more dramatic.

9035482
Yeah but don’t worry I’m sure there people who are liking it

9035485
Honestly? I really don't care despite all the times I mention the like/dislike. I'm writing for fun, but it's nice that a lot of people like the stories I write. I just hope they're not too eager for season 3 to come out. It'd be so easy just to write a time-skip, but that would undermine the development. Sure, I haven't made a whole lot of drama with people being at the changelings' throats, but that's far too overdone. Maybe I should change the description?

9035488
Do what you want if you wanna changed the description you can but yeah you write for fun and your first 2 seasons Of EoH Evolution has been really really good

9035510
Well maybe I could make a drama-ish chapter next. It's called Interview.

Narico, the same nymph who stood against Chrysalis during the wedding, has now become the first changeling king.

Why not make it Thorax?

9035526
Because it's my story dude. I'm going to make a few changes. And who said Narico would stay king after this story? We aren't on season 6 yet, and I'd prefer to avoid spoiling any plans I have.

9035523
Also, I'm only going to make a couple more chapters after this next one. Like, two or three. Season 3 is in high demand, and I don't think people want to wait. Especially since there was no interlude last time.

9035637
Yeah. I think I can see why people don't like the story. It's a mix-up in the flow. Seasons 1 and 2 had no interlude between them, so maybe I'll consider deleting Integration.

9035641
Please maybe don’t..I mean it’s a great interlude to see what’s happening in the changlling kingdom

9035649
Uh, you DO know this is all taking place in Unity, right?

9035656
....ok to be perfectly honest I didn’t know

9035658
Eh. It's cool. Also, this story is mostly just filler until season 3 begins. So there's no real reason for people to enjoy it that much.

9035668
Next chapter's up.

9036276
Another great chapter this was a great interview with Narico and really like the foreshadowing of abyss not only helping Narico but also knew it was him to help him get through the interview

9036466
Next chapter's up.

9038590
Ahhh~ I great chapter love seeing a moment like this a talk between Cadence and Narico and how she saw his interview and like Cadence Telling him how his different from Chrysalis and tells him to keep his heart open and especially when she tells him he had a cute smile and tells him what him being a cinnamon Roll and when she can tell he has already fallen in love with someone

9039018
Thanks. I'm thinking of ending this story in the next chapter. Or do you think there are any more plot points I need to hit?

9039279
Hmmm~ we basically cover everything Narico, adjusting to being king, giving a speech to the other changlling, a interview with him, and a moment between him and cadence talking about what happened, plus foreshadowing of him and abyss.. so I thibk it’s good that the next chapter can be the final one because looks like everything Is about covered up

9039288
Great. But could we speak in a PM concerning this last chapter? there's a plot point that I REALLY don't want to leak in the comments.

9039411
Final chapter's up.

9040637 I really enjoyed this so very very much this chapter had a sweet and loving happy ending and I so very much loved the ending especially the moment with Narico and Abyss and her kissing his cheek and giving him her number. And now I’m looking forward to season 3

Cinnimon roll of a little brother, I love it.

Be funny if she accidentally gave him the wrong number and some random person picked up.

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