This story is a sequel to Elements of Heroism: Season 2
Ever since his first fight, Burst's been faced with some of the deadliest villains Equestria has to offer. However, he didn't expect the first one he fought to return. Things take another strange turn when some guy shows up at his old home in Canterlot claiming to be his brother. One thing is certain though. Burst's life is going to get a lot more interesting.
Note: Any gore in this story will be from fights, and will be mostly minor. Nothing too bloody. Sex refers to moments of intimacy and situations.
Chapters (15)
That ending though...THAT...is a twist.
Also, a nice short prologue before...a funny ending on that one.
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Things are gonna get crazy with the next episode.
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Oh I bet
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Ok 1. Love that funny ending in the Prologue
2. Love the first part of episode 1
And 3. OMC! That ending! I'm really looking forward to what will happen next
Dun dun dun
Help that escalated quickly.
Anybody else thinking run?
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I've been meaning to ask. How do you like my new series?
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It is well done. Although I was confused on the second part of Canterlot Wedding,but I was able to get it.
Is there a possibility of Night being a part of the story?
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I was thinking of having him as a tech-guy for the team. Instead of Duelist Arms, he'll be having a suit of hi-tech armor modelled after Cyber Dragon. Would you like to discuss this in a PM?
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Sure.
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You start it.
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The next episode is up. You won't be disappointed.
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So Epic! The entire fight so epic and amazing! And I love were ice was there to protect Indigo Aswell and with that ending in the chapter we finally have the return of Moon meeting Burst
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So what should the next episode be titled?
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Not really sure it depends really if it's going to be about Moon and Burst or the pinkie episode
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The first one. It'd be pretty lousy of me to tease Moon and then not follow it up with Burst's encounter with her.
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Alright then it should return of Moon
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Or Nightmare's Return.
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Yeah that sounds good
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HYPE!
Also, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Anything that you enjoyed in particular?
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Burst going all out. It's always nice to see someone let put all of their power into one enemy.
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Just wait until the finale.
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I'll have my popcorn ready!
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Let's just say things'll get messy, but the opponents won't even be living.
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... zombies?
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Also, that gives off such a gravity falls vibe to me.
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I'll PM you the details.
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Ok!
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Next chapter's up.
Good job!
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What did you like?
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this chapter was amazing I especially love where Burst encounter Moon and now I'm looking forward to seeing more to come
I love everything about this chapter!
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Next chapter's up.
I just realized I never put this on my favorites...TIME TO RECTIFY THAT!!!
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Seriously, one of your stories NEEDS to go to the popular tab.
Wow! If this doesn't get featured it would be a crime!
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So amazing! My favorite moments we're Everyone finding out about Moon return Aswell as Moon getting her Celestial arms
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Anything else you like?
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I say when Luna and moon conversation about Moon being born
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What about Moon's semi-rant?
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Yeah that was pretty good Aswell
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what made it good?
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It's hard to say I just really like it
Whelp, caught up.
This universe... is alright. I suppose your best improvements are showing in your ability to make things feel epic. The action is this story's strong suit because of that. Also Burst is OP. Like, really OP. He is the strongest incarnation you have of him, heck his starting kit was the stuff from halfway through your past stories and HE TRAINED AT A YOUNG AGE WITH THEM. Burst is a likeable enough MC to carry the story though, but as he gets stronger according to the law of shounen progression: the tension that makes the action awesome is gonna dip. You know this already though, so I don't know why I'm bringing it up... anyway, I'll be able to read your story chapter by chapter as each one releases now, looks like MLPfan hasn't seen the last of me.
One complaint that I noticed for a while but the prologue of this story led me to need to say though: that whole part of their intimate moment where Celestia brought up Burst talking about her body kinda rubs me the wrong way. I get your explanation about how she isn't shy about sexuality since she's an immortal Goddess capable of embracing earthly pleasure, but I can't put my finger on why. Either it's the story being too immature or myself being the immature one. I'm gonna lean on the latter since I can't properly explain it.
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Took forever, but the next chapter is up. I hope you enjoy it.
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OMC! Ok I'm at a list of words for this chapter!… I-I don't even know what part I love! The beginning of this!, the part with Moon and Trixie, the little moment Trixie and ace them become friends …OR seeing Nova flare at the end!… like I'm really at lost of words
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Next episode's up!
Shining Dawn...is a dick...plain and simple. He is the example of what happens when you're so full of yourself and expect others to bend over backwards for you, while not having a single bit of respect for others.
It's going to be fun to see him crash and burn. Great chapter