A thousand years ago, Princess Celestia had to seal her own sister away in the moon and the Elements of Harmony lost their connection to her. Now, the elements of old have begun to awaken. However, new elements have begun to surface as well and new heroes must rise! And it starts with one boy's promise.
Note: The characters in this story will be human. However, they will have characteristics such as wings. Horns won't be necessary considering they channel magic through their hands. That being said, I hope you can all enjoy the story.
Chapters (27)
Interesting but question is this a Prue mlp story or will it crossover with yugioh?
8111714
Which parts of the prologue did you like best?
8111707
purely MLP. No yugioh
8111728 little Burst meeting the princess Celestia
8111731
What did you think of Burst giving her his Optimus Prime plushie?
8111735 I think it was so cute and sweet him giving her his Optimus prime plushie
Makes me want to see how this goes! I'll be reading this!
Wait, this story will have artwork in it? Can I please get some examples?
8111767
I'm afraid not. I suck at drawing, so no artwork. I must apologize. But I'll see if I can get one of my friends to make some that I can upload.
8111768
No it's not. I liked 'Rock the Dragon' so much that I made it the catchphrase of my OC Burst Stream. Sorry if that's a deal breaker for you.
Seems like everything is going good.
not to be rude but i see some errors in spelling
8111867
Where? I want to fix them. It sucks that this site no longer has a spell-check when I type now.
8111882 well in the summary there is the word their and the word connection i do not know of any in the actual story but saw 2 in the summary
8111883
Well, at least it's nothing major.
8111890 why don't you use google drive then transfer it?
8111890 drive has a spellcheck
8111740
Next chapter's up!
Loving the story so far
8111773
It's ok
8112183 SO EPIC! The first fight with Burst and moon was amazing! Along with him coming to ponyville! And him meeting twilight and her friends! Looks forward to seeing Part 2! Know it's going to br great and amazing
8112613
What did you think of Burst's training?
8112736 I Think the training was good with his dad training Burst and he did a really good job training Burst the basics Aswell
8112736 and specking of that Burst Duelist arm appeared in this are the other guys going to be getting Duelist arms from there parents Aswell? Or will they appear/or will find them
In there own
8112743
You'll just have to find out as the story progresses.
8112752 kk
I'm looking forward to it then and can't wait to see more of the story as it goes on
Great job man keep up the good work!
. Whoa! Harsh.
. Oh.
8112773
Thanks for pointing that out. I fixed it now.
8113020 Flows much nicer now. Have a like! And a promise to read fully when I can!
8113055
Thanks!
8112754
Next chapter's up!
8113165
I love it so much! Burst kept his promise and looks like everyone got a happy ending and not only that Nightmare moon will be forming her new body and burst awaken his Element of power!.. and I'm guessing right now that the voice from his duelist arms was Blue eyes! And it will be the same for the other duelist arms for there respective partners
8113179
What did you think of Burst suiting up and talking to Spike?
8113309 I think it was good and a great talk between Spkie and Burst had about if they didn't come back
8113323
By the way, when Burst met the Mane 6, which encounter did you like best?
8113411 hmmmm~... if I had to choose I say pinkie pie
8113415
next chapter's up!
8113495 so epic! Inferno makes his appearance and now the element of potential is been revealed! And I was right about the voices we're going to be
and I love the encounter of Burst and Inferno and looks forward to seeing how the other guys encounters will turn out to be!... but something I need to ask? Witch voice will be talking to ace? Because technically he has two partners Dark Magician Girl and Timaeus
8113506
I will debrief you in a PM about that. But another memeber of our main cast will appear in the next episode!
8113513 sweet! Can't wait to see who will appear next and see witch element will be coming up with it
8113495 it's all in italics. FYI. The chapter was good tho
8113601
I just fixed it.
8113610 ok. Btw, are these humans with wings and horns? Or ponies?
8113613
They're humans if you refer to earlier chapters and the story's description. I even left a note in the description! However, I'll not be using horns. There will be wings though.
8113617 oh I see. Whoops. Haha.
8113622
So what do you think of my decision to not use horns? I left them out because it'd be like an easy weak point for any of the characters.
8113626 it might be interesting. Do they use their magic through their hands then?