When your pride and joy is a country in which trade is booming, the ponies are happy and crime is all but forgotten in the mind of the public, how do you react when an unpredictable, unknown force enters your borders and proceeds to disrupt the status-quo? Crime, once forgotten, is brought to the forefront, the citizens paranoid of criminals once again...and crime drops across the board?
When all senses of balance are thrown into disarray, seeming all by a single vigilante, the only thing the ponies and royalty of Equestria can do, is wonder how a fox can cause so much trouble.
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There are a few words that need to be changed around due to either being the wrong word or simply being misspelled, but otherwise I'm interested! Consider asking around for an editor, hopefully you can find one!
Other than periods missing in almost every dialogue, you have caught my attention.
I’m looking forward to what else you can offer.
Had a similar idea for a displaced story, let's see how this goes☺
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I always thought that was more a writer's preference than a rule set in stone. I don't always end dialogue with a period or exclamation mark or whatever because the sentence isn't done, so having the 'full stop' before the end feels off.
Elsewhere, I do the whole -"But why?"- thing because the sentence is over, but in that example I thought it was a correct use of grammar.
grammar and spelling need work