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Neutral Boy


First time of writing my own stories on here since the first episode of my little pony friendship is magic.

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In a world with mere humans being slaves by multiple species, one escaped slave along with a small band of others who got split up from pursuers, has been saved by someone and is taken into care upon somewhere with hope. One that could change the fate of his humanity and perhaps take down all of the cruel kingdoms by an unlikely alliance who has been at war with each other countless times over, and over, and over again.

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Comments ( 23 )

Wait, hold on, back up. Not only is this yet another universe where ponies are inexplicably evil slavers, but humanity's ally is the Monster Girl universe? The universe of fridge horror where humanity is slowly being wiped from existence by monstergirls converting the humans into their own kind?

Comment posted by Prince Lightning Charge deleted Aug 9th, 2018

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I think so.

9099887
Well it's not just ponies that are slavers. Also I'm not sure about the whole converting part.

9100041
Okay, so the Monster Girl universe is basically just an excuse to have sexytimes with monster girls, right?

But if you read the encyclopedia, you learn that while monster girls have sex with men for need and/or nourishment, when they have sex with women they more often than not convert the women into their species. And monster girls always breed true.

The dwarves of Monster Girl universe are already on the road to extinction because there are almost no non-monster girl female dwarves left.

9100081
Not a lot of sexy times with the monster girls. Yes I did read the Wikipedia & Encyclopedia of these monster girls. I have written a different route for this story so I don't want to spoil everything.

mere weak humans

I wouldn't generalise by saying all humans are weak

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Because there are some good looking hunks of muscle out there

Comment posted by camoblackhawk deleted Sep 17th, 2018

I this is a great storie I don’t see what the problem is

"Get away from him you BITCH!"

I know where this line came from.

Salvation is coming, agaaaaaiiiiinnnnnn. FREE HUMANITY!!!

again news chapter upload. but have you gonna plan for the monsters girls go to equestria worlds?

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I think some people did heard about the game existing and they probably don't like it on this site or they think I'm doing something wrong. :ajbemused: I don't care if people think I'm doing these characters OOC (out of character) or not, it's an 'ALTERNATE F'%$#ING UNIVERSE' people. :twilightangry2: I'm only doing this my own way, whether if they like it or not. If they don't like the story then go bother somewhere else. If anyone does like my story, then welcome and enjoy reading & bookmark it for updates. :twilightsmile:

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You get a cookie.

9788356
Viva la resistance!

9788490
Perhaps, but with some slight changes.

9788989
I am pretty sure when reader read this book they are think that it is the mlp universe the change not the other universe too

Neutral Boy

if everyone be dick or ass to your story, THEN FUCK THEM FUCK THEM IN HELL AND BURN IN ASSHOLE HELL! also, ingore them if they gonna be asshole pussy.

Will this story have any sex scenes, implied or otherwise, where the woman does most or all of the work?

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If there was, then the story would've been on mature. Also I'm trying to make both male and female do the equal work, not for all the females to do like all the work.

Please include a scene where Twi and Dash get tortured next chapter. These two versions deserve it.

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Ohhh I see you want them tortured~? Is it the painful one, kinky one, or perhaps both~? So many options and ideas to choose from~! :pinkiecrazy:

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OOOOHHHHHOHOHOHHHHEHEHEHEHEHEHAHAHAHAHAHHHHH!!! Your wish is my command~.

*Evil laughter and rubbing both hands together*:pinkiecrazy:

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That guy in video sound like he can be a clown.

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