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Tfw you walk through the girls aisle in target, see all the pony clothing, and desperately wish you were a girl aged 4-9. Sigh.

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Ha the titles are lyrics!

(Is easily amused)

My God! This is a masterpiece! The role swap, the articulate and varied words. The detailed discriptions and beautifully simple plot. How you never refer to their bits profanely! But, most of all, the passion and romance expressed. Sure the sheer amount of sex is fantasy, but it's beautiful!

It achieves what all stories strive to, to give an entertaining experience that can be felt. Made me happy in my pants and heart. Seriously good, even with a few grammar spoofs, they actually made me feel better so I didn't get depressed about how this quality utterly crushes my work.

Damn good work! You've made us all proud. You've reminded me that I really need to put effort into my own writting, instead of letting it whither as I fade into and out of the sadness and the void. You've rekindled something that was dying in me, so yeah, I'm raving.

Keep living the dream, whatever that is. - L.P.

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Glad you picked that up. I'm easily amused, too :rainbowlaugh:

8942035
Well thanks! I really appreciate your thoughts on this! I write erotica professionally (under a pseudonym) so I like to think I do something moderately well. There's a balance you have to strike between the sexy times itself, and the interaction between the characters and setting. Too much of one thing and not the others, then it all falls apart spectacularly. I'm happy you think I succeeded in that regard.

Thanks again! :twilightblush:

That was some beautifully written clop.

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If it’s not obvious, Bette Midler is like my personal hero. Thanks!!!

I did like the emotional connections between the characters, though I swear this gives me vibes of an older fic "Spookshow Baby" I think? Though I think this ends happier and is more cohesive of a story.

A good read, and quite unique on some of the clop scenes, words and descriptors used, I will have to use this story as a reference if I ever write clop. :pinkiehappy:

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Hey! Thanks for stopping by! I haven't heard of Spookshow Baby, but anything with Trixie is good in my books! I'll see if I can locate it.

Also glad you enjoyed the clop. I put a lot of effort into erotica (more than my family thinks I should *lol*) and I like to think it's something I do relatively well. Lesbian erotica, at least. I can't write hetero to save my life! Feel free to use any or all of this as a reference for future sexy times! :pinkiehappy:

Cheers!

"Damn straight. I belong to Trixie Lulamoon and no one else." Twilight paused thoughtfully. "Think I should get a tattoo or something? 'Property of Trixie Lulamoon – Keep offsies'?"

What about a collar?

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Don't get ahead of me, bruh. :trixieshiftright: :twilightsheepish:

This was most excellent. One of the best Twixie stories I’ve read. The slow build up of the sexual tension was perfect and the scenes themselves were very erotic without being overly graphic.

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Much appreciated, mi amigo! Always happy to write some erotica on the side :moustache:

This was great. I would watch a TV series based on this story. ♥

I'm a sucker for some good ol' Twixie.:trixieshiftleft:
Love this reversal of an AU. This gonna be good. :moustache:

9043364
Sadly Spookshow Baby no longer exists, but the sequel does.

So they both waited 10 years to have sex again with eachother.

How romantic!

Ooo
Neat idea, the cutie mark of your mate shows up on you after pledging that you're theirs and they're yours.

Like a brand of sorts.


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Kinky:trollestia:

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