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Webdog177


Tfw you walk through the girls aisle in target, see all the pony clothing, and desperately wish you were a girl aged 4-9. Sigh.

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....I feel like if you gave us a detailed description of Fluttershy......I'd turn into a puddle upon reading it.

:rainbowderp: . . . . wow. This couldn't really be Fluttershy, unless she somehow ran into Iron Will and Chrysalis after she left school.

good story so far update soon and wow fluttershy has changed alot

Something about Flutters here has me thinking that Sunny’s about to find herself tied naked to a St. Andrew’s Cross in a few hours. And I suspect that she won’t be adverse. I may be wrong on either point, though.

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Sounds like something "new Fluttershy" would do. Lol

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You been reading my diary? :rainbowlaugh:

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Well you shouldn’t leave it laying around where anyone can find it.

Sounds like Iron Will got to this version of Fluttershy when her friends were not around. A little concerned about Sunset, too, because she seems to have lost some of her fire and energy.

I am not sure this is leading to a healthy relationship. Sunset doesn't seem to have any say in Fluttershy's game here.

Damn. Either you are super good at foreshadowing or I am super good at guessing. Probably the first.

Is it weird that as I read these last two chapters that I'm getting butterflies in my stomach? Wow, Fluttershy has a seductive streak. I guess human Fluttershy has been taking lessons from Chrysalis instead of Iron Will.

Gods damn it, this has been some of the hottest writing I’ve read in a good while.

The actual image source – which isn't a ****ing Pinterest page for an obsolete Derpibooru URL – happens to be "Sunshynesketchtest" by Twilite-sparkleplz on Deviantart.  Since you couldn't be bothered to link back to the artist, may I presume you also didn't ask their permission to use their art?

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You may indeed — I did some digging but couldn’t find the source. Thanks for following up on that :twilightsmile:

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It's been years, if you meet someone and then don't see them for five years they could be a completely different person.

When is the next chapter? You are such a wonderful writer.

Can we have another chapter please?

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