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Grammer, wrong tense, and the fast pace really take away from the premise... You should have asked for a prereader to help
Nice![:pinkiehappy:](https://static.fimfiction.net/images/emoticons/pinkiehappy.png)
Great chapter, so who's the next Target for Velvet's
Great chapter.
i think with all the sex chryssy and velvet have should lead one or both into pregnancy. great story
Not bad at all. The point where Chrysalis transitioned from awkward to horny is not quite clear though.
I wonder if a griffin wants to join in?
Wonderful. Now we just need a zebra, a griffon, a hipppgriff, and a minotaur.