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The_Real_Hog18


Rookie writer Brony, just here to share my stories with everyone

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Anon then went upstairs to search for the alicorn, although he had an idea of where she was gonna be. She’d usually spend most of her time in one of the guest bedrooms, whether it’d be studying human history, writing something in her diary, or sending letters to the princess she mentioned about friendship lessons she had taught to some of the kids in the neighborhood… oh yeah, forgot to mention that does try to teach some friendship lessons to… anyone now and then.

You forgot "she" in between that and does

where did you get the cover image from and who made it?

sussy cover image. I now where this is going.

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Fixed. Thank you for pointing that out.

11913199
I managed to find both, don't know if they were original but I would assume such...

Twilight Velvet was posted by Kirillai over at thatpervert(com) site.
Twilight Sparkle was posted by Hikerumin over at newgrounds(com) site.

I used Google Image Search to look up and those were the only traces I could find using them. Hope this help... I would post a link, but they are sites with a large amounts of NSFW images. So I didn't know the full extent of what is allowed.

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Both are by Hikerumin. 2603527 & 2580106 on Derpi... :scootangel:

Noice 👌

Counting the authors note, I recorded 5 uses of the word "after."

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Not quite. Using the Ctrl + F function I found that there are 9 uses of the word after in this chapter.

it's great nice job:twilightsmile:

JD1

Looks like you forgot to change it to completed.

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Maybe it’s on purpose maybe the story is not yet complete and he’s going to add more

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No it actually was a mistake, but thank you, this gives me at least the opportunity to add an author's note

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