In a collection of moments that don’t make the whole, Rarity learns that dancing in the rain is worth catching the cold.
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Pascoite's blog post sent me here. This is fantastic. The dialogue and monologue are witty, but also precise, incisive, even gut-wrenching. Rarity performing a careful self-dissection. I've never written anything like this.
One typo:
The erosion of time, quiet and inevitable. It's sad to see such beautiful things fall apart. Gosh, this was really good.
I love how disconnected this story felt.
That's... not something I think I've ever said before.
Huh. That was a really nice look into Rarity's character.
This felt too real man. Reading this makes me realize how I even forget what my friends used to be like. Never thought I'd relate myself with Rarity of all people, but I never saw things this way. Great job.