There is a mysterious condition known as lycanthropy, which turns a pony into a dog. Everyone in Equestria thought it was a myth, even Celestia thought so. But the condition finally shows itself once and only once, on none other than the newest princess of Equestria: Twilight Sparkle!
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I LOVED IT! I only have one problem. The story just jumps into the situation too quickly, when Twilight wakes up and then find out that she's turned into a wolf. That could be developed more. Other than that, pretty good. I tried to do the same when I wrote a story called Twilight Turns Into a Puppy, but I sucked at writing it. I cancelled it and gave the rights over to BluePuddlePonyGhost, who made it 100% better.
Still, a cute and adorable story. Stay awesome my friend!
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Wait a minute. YOU WERE THE AUTHOR OF THAT STORY!!! Well, I did read it, and "Lycanthropy" was a based off that said story as well as a few other elements here and there, such as this AU "My Little Wolf", which isn't much of an AU, but is more of some guy drawing ponies as wolves. As for the ending, well, if you know me, I feel like I'm always on a time limit. I think I did a pretty good story, didn't I?
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It was an enjoyable story, yes. Honestly, though, I'm surprised at how many people remember TTIAP (then again, it did receive over 700 views). But I do enjoy a good transformation story, especially involving dog and wolf transformations.
A good tip I can give you from my own experiences is to take your time. If you rush writing the story and you don't enjoy writing it, then it won't come out as well as you would want it to. Perhaps you could make this a series and have all the characters experience transformations. Try to get into writing multiple stories in one series (for example, see my Armada Trilogy) and then perhaps more people will read your stories (please don't take this the wrong way)?
Anyway, I've talked too much now. Have a wonderful day and stay awesome!
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One-shots... aren't really my thing, but maybe I do need an editor.
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I said that maybe I do need an editor.