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DeathKing


Just someone who read a fic and loved it, and now I'm stuck wanting to read more.I might even try to write a story or two.

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Twilight Sparkle. A mare who has accomplice many things in her life. Made friends, saved the world, became a Alicorn.

This story isn't about her

This story is about another Twilight and the pony she brought to life on the faithful day of the Rainboom.


This story was inspired by We're...Twins...yes...twins...

Chapters (1)
Comments ( 21 )

Well written and interesting enough to keep me reading. Can really say more with just this first bit.

I look forward to seeing what happens next.

Interesting enough to track. Let’s see where this goes.

BLSFF

I think its LSBFF.

9892497
I think you might be right. I change it when I finish the next chapter.

9892735
Ps when might that be?

9918790
I'm stuck between wanting to write the next chapter in first person or third person. Or maybe have it start as one and transition to the other.

But don't worry, it shouldn't take long to write it once I found which one I want to do it as.

10019318
Yeah, you would think having the chapter planned out beforehand would help with writing it but its been more of a hindrance to me instead. I think I should go back to writing a chapter by thinking of a idea and going with it and when finish improve what was written until I think its good enough for others to read.

Plus writing a character with little to no personality has been a challenge, one that I been enjoying, but a challenge nonetheless.

10019441
I think you could get the personality from the old Fic.

10020296
I did. I written three versions of this story the first was the most similar using the same human and twivine. The second used a different human and a twivine. The last story I forgo the use of a human and twivine and made a OC pony for it instead.

... I got sidetracked let me start again. I did start the story using a lot of what did Questionable Brony in the first few chapters up to the point where Princess Celestia was talking to Nightlight and Velvet at their home before I made any relatively big changes from the original story. But than a stray thought caught my attention which lead to me stop what I was already writing and start over from a different angle which lead to Wishing on Stardust, which I don't regret doing.

But what I'm trying say is do you think people would care/prefer if I release the first version of this of story as a separate story? I mean already have it partly started so should I say f*** it and go all Leroy Jenkins?

10020462
Maybe not Leroy Jenkins it but use a human that kinda knows what she's doing in the timeline. And yes you should release it. And it would be fun to see two takes on the same story!!!!!

10021641
Okay then! I try getting that version up and running sooner rather than later.

10053867
I finally decided how to start the next chapter and I even began writing it, unfortunately I haven't had much time the last few weeks to finish it.

10053938
Okay hope you find time soon.

10112865
Sorry for the late reply. I been sick on and off the last month and my job wouldn't let me take off. The chapter has been... well I barely touched since I got sick in early-February. I got up to 1800 words before stopping (Which is about half way there) but haven't added much more to it since.

Now I won't lie. I feel like crap. Better crap since the start of February but still crap nonetheless. That doesn't mean I stop writing!... Unless I have a headache, I can't do anything while having a headache.

Anyway, I hope to get this finish before Nioh 2 comes out. So won't tempt me to play it instead of writing.

10113102
I'm sorry to hear your sick and hope you feel better soon!!!!!

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