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FireFlash15


Sup I'm FireFlash15 I'm gonna make some stories and i hope you all will love them.

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A young colt named Blazing Blitz loves to play duel monsters goes to Ponyville to asks the main 6 to help him figure out the secrets of his Millennium puzzle. But his older sister gets kidnapped and a pony named Dueling Striker and he forces Blaze to go to his tournament to save his sister.

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Nice! Also, first!

whats so funny about this is that when i clicked it it instantly showed me a yu-gi-o ad

Not bad, but I would recommend including the levels of each monster played. I also had a bit of trouble following the duel proper in this chapter.

Also, here are the effect and play errors you made:
1. You can't use Flute of Summoning Dragons without having Lord of D. on the field. Even then, the dragons you want to summon have to be in your hand, not your deck.
2. Red-eyes and Blue-eyes are both too high-level to be summoned without a sacrifice.

Other than that, my only other question is why you started both of them off with 2000 instead of 4 or 8000?

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I don't really know all the rules in yu-gi-oh so I didn't know everything about the card game or series.

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Also I did 2000 Life points because that's how they start off in season 1 so I'm going on and when I think about it I will change the life points.

I would like some help for what should happen in the next chapter and what it should be called. Please let me know in your comments please.

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Fair enough. I just wanted to bring those to your attention. If you want to know anything else about the game, let me know and I'll do what I can to help you out.

Just ask for a favor but I need three different names for three friends for Blaze when he was a year younger when he was building the millennium puzzle. If you guys could please give me some suggestions and that will be great. Thank you :-)

I'm letting everyone know that I have school and I have to take care of my siblings very often so I won't make a lot of chapters for a while. so just to give everyone a heads up. Thank you.

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