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FireFlash15


Sup I'm FireFlash15 I'm gonna make some stories and i hope you all will love them.

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A young colt named Blazing Blitz loves to play duel monsters goes to Ponyville to asks the main 6 to help him figure out the secrets of his Millennium puzzle. But his older sister gets kidnapped and a pony named Dueling Striker and he forces Blaze to go to his tournament to save his sister.

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Comments ( 17 )

Nice! Also, first!

whats so funny about this is that when i clicked it it instantly showed me a yu-gi-o ad

Not bad, but I would recommend including the levels of each monster played. I also had a bit of trouble following the duel proper in this chapter.

Also, here are the effect and play errors you made:
1. You can't use Flute of Summoning Dragons without having Lord of D. on the field. Even then, the dragons you want to summon have to be in your hand, not your deck.
2. Red-eyes and Blue-eyes are both too high-level to be summoned without a sacrifice.

Other than that, my only other question is why you started both of them off with 2000 instead of 4 or 8000?

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I don't really know all the rules in yu-gi-oh so I didn't know everything about the card game or series.

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Also I did 2000 Life points because that's how they start off in season 1 so I'm going on and when I think about it I will change the life points.

I would like some help for what should happen in the next chapter and what it should be called. Please let me know in your comments please.

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Fair enough. I just wanted to bring those to your attention. If you want to know anything else about the game, let me know and I'll do what I can to help you out.

Just ask for a favor but I need three different names for three friends for Blaze when he was a year younger when he was building the millennium puzzle. If you guys could please give me some suggestions and that will be great. Thank you :-)

I'm letting everyone know that I have school and I have to take care of my siblings very often so I won't make a lot of chapters for a while. so just to give everyone a heads up. Thank you.

Comment posted by Hamster_Master deleted April 26th

Hey guys sorry for not making any chapter or stories in a while. I am busy with school and have little time to make anything. be know that i will try my best to make more chapters and stories as i can. if you want so make a character in my story or have an idea of a chapter please let me know. have a great day

I am sad that 'Blaster, Dragon Ruler Of Infernos' is a banned card now. It is my favorite card.

So far this has been a good book.

This is certainly an interesting take on Yu-Gi-Oh In Equestria. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this.

Just as a rule of thumb, though, every speaker should get their own paragraph. Observe:



"Bakura, I know how we're going to defeat Blazing Blitz in a duel!" Marik said.

"You mean that pony who's exactly like Yugi Moto?" Yami Bakura asked.

"Don't be ridiculous, Fluffy. Blazing Blitz is nothing like Yugi Moto. For one, his name is different," Marik said.

"Yes, and...?" Yami Bakura raised an eyebrow.

"Erm...well...his hair is less outrageous than Yugi's, I suppose," Marik said.

"Seriously, what is up with Yugi's hair?" Yami Bakura asked.

"What's up with your hair, Bakura?" Marik asked back. "You perpetually look like you just got out of bed."

"L'Oreal, because I'm worth it," Yami Bakura answered. "I think LittleKuriboh did that joke already."

"Hooray for stealing!" Marik cheered.

"And thus ends our little skit," Yami Bakura said.

(You can tell I had too much fun making this.)

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I'm glad you like it I will use your advice

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