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FireFlash15


Sup I'm FireFlash15 I wish to make good stories about Yu-Gi-Oh and improve on them later.

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A young colt named Blazing Blitz loves to play duel monsters goes to Ponyville to asks the main 6 to help him figure out the secrets of his Millennium puzzle. But his older sister gets kidnapped and a pony named Dueling Striker and he forces Blaze to go to his tournament to save his sister.

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Comments ( 41 )

Nice! Also, first!

Not bad, but I would recommend including the levels of each monster played. I also had a bit of trouble following the duel proper in this chapter.

Also, here are the effect and play errors you made:
1. You can't use Flute of Summoning Dragons without having Lord of D. on the field. Even then, the dragons you want to summon have to be in your hand, not your deck.
2. Red-eyes and Blue-eyes are both too high-level to be summoned without a sacrifice.

Other than that, my only other question is why you started both of them off with 2000 instead of 4 or 8000?

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I don't really know all the rules in yu-gi-oh so I didn't know everything about the card game or series.

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Also I did 2000 Life points because that's how they start off in season 1 so I'm going on and when I think about it I will change the life points.

I would like some help for what should happen in the next chapter and what it should be called. Please let me know in your comments please.

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Fair enough. I just wanted to bring those to your attention. If you want to know anything else about the game, let me know and I'll do what I can to help you out.

Just ask for a favor but I need three different names for three friends for Blaze when he was a year younger when he was building the millennium puzzle. If you guys could please give me some suggestions and that will be great. Thank you :-)

I'm letting everyone know that I have school and I have to take care of my siblings very often so I won't make a lot of chapters for a while. so just to give everyone a heads up. Thank you.

Comment posted by DAMN HAMSTER deleted Apr 26th, 2018

Hey guys sorry for not making any chapter or stories in a while. I am busy with school and have little time to make anything. be know that i will try my best to make more chapters and stories as i can. if you want so make a character in my story or have an idea of a chapter please let me know. have a great day

I am sad that 'Blaster, Dragon Ruler Of Infernos' is a banned card now. It is my favorite card.

So far this has been a good book.

This is certainly an interesting take on Yu-Gi-Oh In Equestria. I'm looking forward to seeing what you do with this.

Just as a rule of thumb, though, every speaker should get their own paragraph. Observe:



"Bakura, I know how we're going to defeat Blazing Blitz in a duel!" Marik said.

"You mean that pony who's exactly like Yugi Moto?" Yami Bakura asked.

"Don't be ridiculous, Fluffy. Blazing Blitz is nothing like Yugi Moto. For one, his name is different," Marik said.

"Yes, and...?" Yami Bakura raised an eyebrow.

"Erm...well...his hair is less outrageous than Yugi's, I suppose," Marik said.

"Seriously, what is up with Yugi's hair?" Yami Bakura asked.

"What's up with your hair, Bakura?" Marik asked back. "You perpetually look like you just got out of bed."

"L'Oreal, because I'm worth it," Yami Bakura answered. "I think LittleKuriboh did that joke already."

"Hooray for stealing!" Marik cheered.

"And thus ends our little skit," Yami Bakura said.

(You can tell I had too much fun making this.)

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I'm glad you like it I will use your advice

Hi I really like your story is it's like the animated but it's awesome and amazing I was wondering when will be the next chapter answer me when you can

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I'm not sure yet. I's busy with school but i think i might have time in the. Next following days. If not Then maybe next week.

Okay thanks for thanks for answering

Nice chapter, I do tho really want to see Spike duel and have him be damn good at it honestly. I feel that everyone overlooks Spike or doesn't pay attention to him. I think that would be there mistake. He would have the most time to study and know all the strategies but unlike Twilight would would relay solely on that. Spike is would also have the instinct to just go with the flow. I would hate to see him put off in to the side characters. He isn't a Tristan that is for sure. I just worry that Blaze will win too much like really all the main stars of Yugioh does. I mean what is the fun when they win 98% of their matches and the one time they lose it shatters their worlds. SOMETIME you lose no matter how good or Tier 0 your deck is you sometimes luck just isn't on your side and if magic can change that than you are CHEATING lol.

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Well if you have an idea for what spike's Deck should be please let me know.

I really like it it's awesome and great can't wait for the next one es for your ideas they are great to can't wait to see them as for spike deck really don't know I dragon deck with red eye cards maybe I really don't know

No problem happy to help let me know if you need any other advice can't wait for the next chapter

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say are you gonna use the ghost guy who had the mulenum key?

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Shadi? Probably but maybe a different name.

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i couldint even remember his name but cool becouse he is like a ghost. ghosts are cool.

Hey guys I am having a hard time deciding on what spike's deck will be. I need your guys help on it. Note: I am a beginner/amateur at the game so I need to know the effects of the cards before I can type them.Please let me know.

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Well what cards do you need to know about? How about time wizard and baby dragon if you get it right your opponents monsters lose attack and defense points and baby dragon becomes thousand dragon or red eyes black metal dragon to summon it you need red eyes black dragon and a metal morph trap card or blue flame swords man when destroyed you can summon the original flame swords man to the field or claw of hermos when fused with rocket warrior it forms rocket hermos cannon, when fused with red eyes black dragon it forms red eyes black dragon sword. that all i can think of and yes i know those are all just jeoy wellers moves but i would like to see a character based off of him.

Just want everyone to know I made an account on Wattpad and made a new story. If you want to see here is the link.

https://www.wattpad.com/story/213704572-blur-the-hedgehog%27s-adventures

Hope you enjoy the story

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I don’t know why but I saw it on the band list

I want to thank everyone for liking my story and I apologize for not updating it. I don’t have a computer so it is hard for me to make a chapter. But when I get a new computer maybe I will remake this story or continue this one, it’s just wait til I get my new computer and lets see what happens. Again thank you all so very much.

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Yeah..
Sadly Spike usually gets left out(or not even get to duel at all) in YGO fics.
The fics where he does either have him ultimately end up in the "chosen ones" shadows(due to being a side character) and/or ultimately get taken out(and need someone to save him. You know.. like how in YGO stuff, many duelists not the protagonist gets "temporarily killed off" or something for the stakes the bad guys poses and such) or even ends up losing alot. Or said fics end up being left unfinished(I found 3 or so cool fics where Spike is the protag but sadly those fics are left hanging). Even then there's not much fics of Spike getting to duel.

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How is the progress on the new computer going actually?

Oh good dont worry dude take your time, but if can i make a sugestion? give more importance to spike, there is another yugioh cross mlp fic where Spike is a good character but it is the only story where if he is well managed, hopefully you can give more relevance to that dragon in the future

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Actually are 4 fics but there are from the same writter

Yugioh EQG, Yugioh EQG Shadow Gates, Yugioh EQG XX and Yugioh EQG Omega Zenith (but in this one Spike doesnt have much participation)

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Oh, those.
Eh.. from what i read from the tropes, it felt like it followed the issues on how Spike is handled usually in YGO crossover fics..
Like how Spike is ultimately in the shadows of others and ultimately lose and such.
Heck, his first appearance is he loses to Garble(FREAKING GARBLE) and loses his deck to him and needs Flash to get it back. That really left a dark mark on Spike's image that.
I know he has some moments but sadly according to what I saw so far, its like he's ultimately in the shadows of others and taken out.
And hurts that apparently he's not much in the 4th(most likely final) fic, meaning he's ultimately left out/in the others' shadows.

It hurts that there's not much fics where Spike gets to duel(especially in EGQ ones where its due to he's stuck as a damn dog) and sadly in the one that do, he is either ultimately taken out/loses(I mean like in serious stuff and needs someone to rescue him) and ends up in the shadows of others due to he's not a "chosen one" or the fics that do have him duel and not be in others' shadows ends up unfinished(3 so far and all of them actually have him be the main protag there).

I wonder if this story will continue

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