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ThomasZoey3000

A Brony since 2014, and one that wishes to share stories out of my imagination and sometimes inspired by other works.

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This story is a sequel to Sweetie Belle's Big Adventure

The holiday; Hearth's Warming is back in Equestria and for the Shimmer family, they get a great surprise in the form of the oldest daughter returning for the holidays. However, Sunset herself will also experience surprises as she and her family meet up with Moon Crest's sister and her family, and deal with the unruly grandmare; Sunbeam Shimmer. One thing is certain, this visit will be more eventful than the first one
(Set Around the Time of Season 6 Episode 8 'A Hearth's Warming Tail', and comes long after Sweetie Belle's Big Adventure')
Chapters (10)
Complete Published: Dec 15th, 2017 Download
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Starlight Nova
Starlight Nova #1 · Dec 16th, 2017 · · · Dad's Side of the Family ·
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Where can I read Sweetie Belle's Big Adventure?

ThomasZoey3000
ThomasZoey3000 #2 · Dec 18th, 2017 · · · Dad's Side of the Family ·
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You can find it in my stories selection, it was the one I had posted before this one.

bergstrom528
bergstrom528 #3 · Jan 1st, 2018 · · · Till We Meet Again ·
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love it so far. please make a sequel soon.

ThomasZoey3000
ThomasZoey3000 #4 · Jan 1st, 2018 · · · Till We Meet Again ·
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Sunset will meet up with her family again one day, don't you worry about that.

Magic135
Magic135 #5 · Dec 20th, 2020 · · · The Hearth's Warming Confrontation ·
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Great job for Granite, even he can have a good side.

Magic135
Magic135 #6 · Dec 17th, 2021 · · · Returning for the Holidays ·
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Great start for some holiday fun.

Magic135
Magic135 #7 · Dec 17th, 2021 · · · Dad's Side of the Family ·
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Who knew Moon was a snowball pro?

Magic135
Magic135 #8 · Dec 19th, 2021 · · · Storytime with Dad ·
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I hope Moon will see Skywriter again one day.

Magic135
Magic135 #9 · Dec 19th, 2021 · · · Sunbeam and Sunflower ·
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I can tell Sunset's grandma is the bad guy. The way she talks just says bad guy.

Magic135
Magic135 #10 · Dec 22nd, 2021 · · · The Angry Brat ·
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If anypony can make Granite change his ways, Sunset can.

Magic135
Magic135 #11 · Dec 23rd, 2021 · · · Family is Important ·
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Nice reference to Ice Age.

Magic135
Magic135 #12 · Dec 24th, 2021 · · · A Night to Forget ·
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That Sunbeam, she's stepping into trouble later.

Magic135
Magic135 #13 · Dec 27th, 2021 · · · A Good Side to Everypony ·
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Good move on Night's part, and Sunset is not giving up on Granite.

mlptwiflashfan4ever
mlptwiflashfan4ever #15 · Feb 28th, 2022 · · · Till We Meet Again ·
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will there be a direct sequel after this story, about what happens to sunset after this, like her coming back to equestria after a few months, to get to know her sister & other relative's more & another [problem adventure] pops up & they have to deal with sunbeam & pen pal escaping because they started talking & realized they both had grudges against sunset & want to deal with her [permanently] & it takes THE ENTIRE shimmer family to bring them down. hope you like & might use this idea, please and thank you!

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #16 · Sep 11th, 2022 · · · Returning for the Holidays ·
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"Yeah, but I wish it was this year's Hearth's Warming."

Well your definitely gonna be getting your wish soon Sunny. :twilightsmile:

He was about to turn back towards the house when he noticed the hooded pony. At first, he didn't recognize her, but after a moment, a smile came to his face, "will Sunny Rays ever be happy to see you again."

I think that should be changed to. "Sunny Rays will be happier than ever to see you again."

Like the last time Sunset arrived, Moon Crest had to bang on the door a few times with his shoulder, until at last the door opened. He groaned at the slight pain, "we really need to replace that door," he muttered.

You don't say!?!? :pinkiecrazy:

"Don't worry kiddo, I'm not going to kick you out of the family just because of what happened years before. Believe me, I've learned my lesson."

Good. :ajsmug:

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #17 · Sep 11th, 2022 · · · Dad's Side of the Family ·
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"Okay Mom, I'll give you a hand...er, hoof. Ugh! There I go again. One day I'm going to master the two lingos."

You will eventually. :ajsmug:

Shocking Sunset, she managed to create at least fifteen snowballs all at once. She would've admitted that she was becoming a very powerful unicorn, but for now, she had to duck for cover as Sunny Rays' snowballs were flying her way.

Impressive. :applejackunsure:

"Hour and a half? Wow, that's an improvement from the last time I was here," Sunset thought to herself.

Mhm. :twilightsmile:

Sunrise nodded. He didn't even need to ask her, she would've said yes to the idea of them staying. "We can give up our room for you two," she said, pointing a hoof to Sunflower and Concrete, "and as for your kids..."

So then where will they sleep? :unsuresweetie:

While Sunset continued to write to her friends, Sunny Rays set up her stuffed toys and blanket on the bed. Despite being a three year old, she was good at organizing things into a proper order.

How good of her. :scootangel:

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Ikr.

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #18 · Sep 11th, 2022 · · · Storytime with Dad ·
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The following next morning, Sunset got up bright and early, and after whispering to Sunny Rays that she was going downstairs, she went down to see if her parents were up. As she got halfway down the stairs, she could hear two female voices talking in the kitchen, one was her mother's voice, and the other was of her Aunt; Sunflower.

Following or next should be removed imo, makes no sense if they're both there. :applejackconfused:

"Indeed, and it's what brought Concrete and I together."

Talk about an odd way to start a relationship. :applejackunsure:

"That's the one. I've never met the pony myself. In fact I didn't see her at Twilight's castle, but from what Twilight has told me, she's got magic that rivals her and she's very smart."

You will eventually. :raritywink:

Berry Flight swam close to them and they tried to get back to dry land, but the waves were pushing them further away from shore. Worst still, there was a waterfall just up ahead. Any moment, they would fall to their doom.

Oh no! 😱

"To an extent, yes he was and glad to be alive, but he wasn't the same as he was before. You see Sunset, during the fall, his wings hit the rocks hard and damaged beyond believe. The doctors had to remove his wings, and they said he could never fly again. As if that wasn't enough, he had suffered brain damage too as was proven when his grades started slipping. He got held back for two years before he finally walked out on the school, and much later, he was starting to forget things. But the one thing he lost during the fall was his awesome attitude." Moon Crest lifted a hoof and placed it right beside the photograph, "it was like my best friend was lost in that waterfall, and in his place, was a pony I haven't seen or heard from in moons."

What a sad story. :fluttercry:

He lifted one of his carving tools over to Sunset, who nodded and excepted with her magic. Then they began to work on the carving, which was to be of the Friendship Express locomotive. As they worked, Moon Crest looked back to the photo and smiled, " we will meet again my friend, we will meet again. "

👀

"This must be a joke right? Why are the traitors in this house?"

Shit! 😨

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #19 · Sep 11th, 2022 · · · Sunbeam and Sunflower ·
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Sunset groaned and rolled her eyes, this was excatly how she remembered her grandmare from her younger days. Only she remembered arguing back with her quite a few times, which was something she didn't intend on doing now.

Damn. :pinkiegasp:

Night Glide stepped forward, "that's enough honey. Look, I know that's the way you were raised, but surely now's a time to let go of the family ways and maybe try to patch things up. Our daughter and grand-daughter are here now, so why not give them a chance?"

Glad to see he's still the same. :yay:

Moon Crest turned back to his sister with a smile on his face, "of course I'd stand up for you. It's what a brother, or father does."

Mhm. :twilightsmile:

Hearing her say that, Sunset began to think there was more to the story of her being kicked out than what she had been told before, but she said nothing as they continued on.

Probably. :unsuresweetie:

"Whatever," came the blunt reply.

Guess he really is similar to his grandfather. :applejackunsure:

Sunflower nodded, "I said a few more words after that, but for your sake as well as the little one's sakes..." she paused and looked back to her sleeping children, "I won't repeat them. Anyways long story short, I was kicked out. Using what little money I had, I took the train to Manehatten to meet with other members of the family. Somehow though, my mother had managed to tell them never to let me in, and they didn't. After that, the rest you know."

What a sad story indeed. :raritycry:

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I'd hate to have a grandmother like her. Fortunately both of my were kind and cared about people. :pinkiesmile:

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #20 · Sep 11th, 2022 · · · The Angry Brat ·
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"Oh it'll be a surprise alright, but not in the way you think it will be," and he chuckled to himself as he walked away from the room.

I got a bad feeling about this. :fluttershysad:

Once again, the sun hadn't even gotten up by the time Sunset Shimmer woke up. Sunny Rays was still fast asleep and surronded by stuffed toys, "how she's able to sleep like that I'll never know," she thought to herself.

Some things are best left a mystery. :ajsmug:

The answer became clear as Night Glide came out with a book, and from what Sunset could see, was a history book on railroads and trains of Equestria.

There's something I'd like anyday now! :pinkiehappy:

"Afraid so," sighed Sunrise. "It's a good idea to have him stay in the basement as punishment. That being said, sweet Celestia, that boy is giving me quite a headache." She sighed, "oh well, can't give in or he'll never learn."

Right. :twilightsmile:

"I should get some lessons from Sunny Rays on how to keep things neat and tidy," she chuckled to herself.

For sure. :ajsmug:

"You might not give up kid, but lucky for you, neither do I." Sunset was determined to help her cousin change his ways before the holidays were done. Somehow, someway.

Eventually... :unsuresweetie:

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #21 · Sep 12th, 2022 · · · Family is Important ·
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"I know, but if he can promise to be good, then maybe we should give him a chance."

I'll take it with a grain of salt. :duck:

"FINE!" snapped Granite. "Not that I care! I wanted to go to Appleloosa!"

He's gonna get tired of saying that eventually. :ajbemused:

Sunflower stopped him with her magic, "we're only letting you because we don't want you to miss all the fun, but your cousin Sunset will be watching your every move, and if you do something stupid, it's back here for you and you'll be in the basement for the rest of the night."

go should be added after before because.

"So you say, loser."

There's something I'd never say to my own mom! :twilightangry2:

"He's another bully at my school. He's always picking on any pony weaker or smaller than him. He and Granite are always arguing, and more than once, they get into hoof fights."

Oh boy! :twilightoops:

Sunset stopped him though with her magic, "you're not going anywhere. Last chance Granite, stop that or I'll give you a few choice words of my own."

Good save Sunset. :yay:

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #22 · Sep 12th, 2022 · · · A Night to Forget ·
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Night Glide shook his head, "I sometimes wonder why I stay married to her." And he followed his wife back into the house.

Should have divorced her a long time ago. :duck:

"Please, call me Dad, you earned that a long time ago Sunrise," Night Glide smiled. Using his magic, he made the groceries fly over to the kitchen and onto the table.

That just feels weird, I think only someone's child should call them that name. Not their children's wife or husband. :unsuresweetie:

The peaceful moment though wasn't going to last as another pony came into the house. It was in fact, Sunbeam Shimmer and looking livid, "Night Glide, how dare you!"

https://m.

An angry look came to Sunbeam's face, "fine then, I'll deal with this myself, just you see if I don't." She turned on her hooves and stormed away.

She needs help, and lots of therapy. :ajbemused:

At Sunbeam and Night Glide's house, Night Glide was reading his newest book on railroads of Equestria when his wife stepped into the living room, "you know Night Glide, maybe I was being too hasty earlier when I said you couldn't go to the play. It is a tradition after all for your end of the family, and I shouldn't force you to end it just on my word."

I'd so get along with him for his love for trains. :pinkiehappy:

"I heard a gang of nasty ponies are planning on robbing the house of my son and his family. There are two adult ponies, two little ones and a last one who looks like that nice pony from a few months ago. You know, the one from the Clock Tower fight."

God damn it woman! :twilightangry2:

Of course what Sunbeam said wasn't true, but she figured that being arrested would be good enough to getting the traitors out of the house. She smiled at her own plan, "Moon Crest will thank me for this later."

He will not! :flutterrage:

"I see. Well then, this has been a big misunderstanding, I speak for the entire police department when I say we're sorry. As for the pony who reported this, she will be hearing from us. Let's go boys!"

Sunbeam better get a good punishment for her troubles! 😡

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Mhm.

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #23 · Sep 12th, 2022 · · · A Good Side to Everypony ·
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"No worries Sir, it won't happen ever again."

Something tells me it will Moon Glider. :ajbemused:

"No, these need to go."

Your husband is gonna be very pissed you did that! :duck:

But there was no reply from his wife. He put the food in the fridge, and headed upstairs. There, he recieved a shock. The photo album had been emptied out of many of the photos, and the photos themselves had been burned.

Are you kidding me! :pinkiegasp:
She's gone to far this time! :twilightangry2::flutterrage:

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #24 · Sep 12th, 2022 · · · The Hearth's Warming Confrontation ·
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Day soon turned to night, and after another big dinner, followed by a small snowball war in the backyard and chatting with Night Glide about his days working on the Equestrian railways, Sunny Rays was finally ready to go to sleep. As she walked up the stairs, she could see her Aunt and Uncle setting up sleeping bags in her little bedroom, right next to her little bed. Night Glide walked past her a moment later, he waved an almost cheerful wave to her, then walked over to Sunrise and Moon Crest's bedroom.

Awesome to know he worked on a Railroad! One of my uncles was once one for Illinois central. :pinkiehappy:

"Oh I'm sure we'll think of something. After all, we're both a pair of smart cookies, remember that." And she rubbed the top of Sunny Rays' head, messing up her mane once more and making her smile. Sunset's stomach started rumbling, "great, now I got myself hungry with that statement."

Lol. :rainbowlaugh:

"Better watch it Granite or..." but Sun Drops was interupted by Sunset placing her hoof in front of her cousin's mouth. She shook her head as if to say 'don't go there', and with that, the room went silent again.

Yeah, don't ruin the moment. :ajbemused:

Determined to bring Night Glide back by any means, she used her magic to pick up a shovel and started clearing her own path way. She grumbled about it the whole time, "when I get his sorry flank back over here, I'll make sure he stays outside till he learns who's the boss around here."

And here I was hoping she'd get lonely and understand what he meant, but no. I spoke too soon. :facehoof:

Granite slowly opened the present, then opened the box inside, revealing a wooden model of the Friendship Express. He looked at it for the longest time, leaving his family to wonder. He put the train down and rolled it along the floor, "it's nice," he said, "thank you."

Nice! :raritystarry:

"Believe you? Now why would we do that? After all the stupid things you've said and done, we should just put you back in the basement as we listen to the carollers."

But he's telling the truth Sun Drops! :raritydespair:

The room seemed to go quiet, before Sunbeam spoke again, "no, I will not stop. The family traditions are too important to be ignored, now get over here Night Glide! NOW!" Using her magic, she forced the shovel away from Moon Crest, "and I'll kick these traitors out myself!" She swung the shovel wildly, ready to hit anypony.

At this point, i think she's a lunatic. :unsuresweetie:

"We're not going anywhere, we're staying and we're going to keep coming back for Hearth's Warming. Cause after seeing your actions, I rather be with my family in happiness, then living alone in pure anger."

Proud of you Granite. :twilightsmile:

Two officers walked up to her and placed hoof-cuffs on her. The third officer picked up the shovel, then with Sunbeam struggling to get away from them, the police walked out of the house.

I kinda wish she just would've accepted this, but I guess not everyone can have a change of heart in a short amount of time like granite. :fluttershysad:

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Shame Sunbeam doesn't. :ajsleepy:

ScisetShimmerEvan
ScisetShimmerEvan #25 · Sep 12th, 2022 · · · Till We Meet Again ·
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But he would have no luck. He would be spending his Hearth's Warming in his cell, and listening to the screams of Sunbeam Shimmer.

Deal with it bitch. :duck:

"I'll try. Most of the time," he muttered the last part, but mostly everypony heard him.

Good enough. :ajsmug:

At that moment, they all heard the sounds of a five chime steam whistle, which meant the train for Ponyville was due to arrive any minute.

Wonder what kind of 5 chime that is? :rainbowderp:

Human Applejack laughed, "am I actually hearing that correctly? Rainbow Dash, the girl who plays on every single team and plays in all kinds of weather is actually freezing out here?"

Mhm. :ajsmug:

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I hope you pinkie promise that. :pinkiesmile:

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